Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了“nice smiles”这一不恰当的表达，应改为描述花的香味或形态等。句子结构较简单，且有些重复，建议使用更自然的表达并避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they have bright colors and pleasant fragrances. I enjoy different kinds of flowers as they always make me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，如“my mom love”应为“my mom loves”，“have hobbies in the plant flowers”表达不清且不自然。建议使用正确的语法并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mom loves flowers because she enjoys gardening. She usually plants various flowers on our balcony.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，缺少标点，重复词汇“community community”，语法错误较多。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because people like planting them in their yards. Therefore, my community has many parks and gardens filled with flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但“when I'm working”与拍花照片的场景不太匹配，建议更具体说明拍摄时间或场合。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to take photos of flowers in my daily life because it helps me relax. I often capture their beauty when I go for a walk in the park.

Gợi ý: 表达基本清晰，但“like often send”语序不当，应调整为“often like to send”。建议注意词序和冠词使用。

Ví dụ: In my country, people often like to send flowers to others, especially on special occasions such as birthdays or weddings. It is a traditional way to show love and appreciation.

× Yes, my mom love flowers because they have hobbies in the plant flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers because she has a hobby of planting flowers.

主语是单数的“my mom”，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“loves”。此外，表达“have hobbies in the plant flowers”不正确，应改为“has a hobby of planting flowers”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× She usually plant various flowers in the balcony.

✓ She usually plants various flowers on the balcony.

动词“plant”应使用第三人称单数形式“plants”。介词“in the balcony”不正确，正确用法是“on the balcony”，因为阳台是一个表面。

× Yes there are a lot of flowers where I live peoples like plant flowers in their yard so my community community have many parks and gardens.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live. People like to plant flowers in their yards, so my community has many parks and gardens.

“peoples”应为复数“people”，表示人们；“plant”应改为不定式“to plant”；“yard”应为复数“yards”；“community community”重复，应去掉一个；“community have”主语是单数，应改为“community has”。句子应拆分为两句以改善结构。

× Yes, I'd like to take photos of flowers in my daily life. It can make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I'd like to take photos of flowers in my daily life. They can make me feel relaxed.

代词“it”指代复数“photos”不正确，应使用复数代词“they”。

× In my country, people like often send flowers to others, especially the special occasions such as birthday or weddings.

✓ In my country, people often like to send flowers to others, especially on special occasions such as birthdays or weddings.

副词“often”位置不当，应放在“like”之前；“like send”应改为“like to send”；“the special occasions”前不需要定冠词“the”；“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”；“on special occasions”是正确的介词搭配。