Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and can express emotions. Whenever I see them, I like to take photos to capture their beauty.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and articles, and try to provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: My mom is obsessed with flowers. She buys fresh flowers every week and places them in every room of our house to brighten up the space.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: In my area, it's very hot, so flowers don't grow naturally. We can only find a few types of flowers, and most of them are bought from stores.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward expressions and minor errors. Use more natural phrases and correct prepositions. Also, explain briefly why you take photos to add depth.

Ví dụ: I often take photos of flowers when I see them on my way to university, and sometimes I share these pictures on social media because I find them beautiful.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and slightly unclear. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide a specific example if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often give flowers along with gifts because flowers are seen as a way to express emotions and feelings to the recipient.

× I think flowers it's an expression for our our feelings and emotions and it can be.

✓ I think flowers are an expression of our feelings and emotions, and they can be.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' (it is) to refer to 'flowers', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, 'an expression for' should be 'an expression of'. Repetition of 'our' is a typo. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× My mom obsessed with flowers.

✓ My mom is obsessed with flowers.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject 'My mom' with the adjective 'obsessed'. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× She put flowers weekly and bring it to our home.

✓ She puts flowers weekly and brings them to our home.

The verbs 'put' and 'bring' need to be in the third person singular present tense ('puts', 'brings') to agree with 'She'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'.

× Every room in our home has a flowers.

✓ Every room in our home has flowers.

'Flowers' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× Where I live live there are no allowed flowers because of the weather.

✓ Where I live, flowers are not allowed because of the weather.

The phrase 'no allowed flowers' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'flowers are not allowed'. Also, 'live live' is a repetition error and a comma is needed after 'Where I live'.

× It's so hot so we can find the flowers just in some forms but we can bought it from stores flowers.

✓ It's so hot that we can find flowers only in some farms, but we can buy them from stores.

'Forms' should be 'farms'. 'Bought' is past tense; 'buy' is correct here. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I would really take photos for flowers when I see them on the way to my universe and sometimes I post them in social media.

✓ I really take photos of flowers when I see them on the way to my university, and sometimes I post them on social media.

'Would' is unnecessary here; simple present tense is appropriate. 'Photos for flowers' should be 'photos of flowers'. 'Universe' is a typo for 'university'. 'In social media' should be 'on social media'.

× In my country, flowers can be given with the gift because we think flowers can express our emotions and feelings to that person that we want to give him or her a gift.

✓ In my country, flowers can be given with gifts because we think flowers can express our emotions and feelings to the person we want to give a gift to.

'With the gift' should be 'with gifts' for generality. The phrase 'to that person that we want to give him or her a gift' is awkward; rephrased for clarity and correct preposition placement.