Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding hesitation and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you love flowers with specific reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and can express emotions. For example, we often give flowers as gifts to show love and appreciation to others.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your mom's love for flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother is very fond of flowers. She brings fresh flowers home every week and places them in every room, which makes our house look lively and colourful.

Gợi ý: Focus on answering the question directly with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific details about the environment where you live.

Ví dụ: There are not many flowers where I live because the weather is not suitable for growing them. Usually, flowers can only be found on farms in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Avoid confusion and irrelevant phrases. Answer the question directly with clear sentences and provide specific examples of when you take photos of flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when I see beautiful ones. For instance, last week I took pictures of some flowers and shared them on my social media.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific cultural details about sending flowers as gifts.

Ví dụ: In my country, people often send flowers along with gifts to express their emotions and feelings to loved ones. This is a common way to show care and affection.

× Flowers are something beautiful for me.

✓ Flowers are something beautiful to me.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to express personal feelings or opinions is 'to'. The phrase 'something beautiful to me' correctly conveys that flowers are beautiful in the speaker's opinion.

× It's, uh, explain our emotions you we can give them as a gift for the people that we love.

✓ They explain our emotions; we can give them as a gift to the people that we love.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It's, uh, explain' is incorrect; the subject 'They' (referring to flowers) should be used with the verb 'explain'. Also, 'for the people' should be 'to the people' when indicating the recipient of a gift. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical structure.

× My mom obsessed with flowers.

✓ My mom is obsessed with flowers.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject 'My mom' with the adjective phrase 'obsessed with flowers'. This is a subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issue.

× She. Bring to our home flowers weekly.

✓ She brings flowers to our home weekly.

The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the subject 'She'. Also, the sentence structure is corrected by removing the period and rearranging the word order to a natural English sentence.

× Where are you? Where are I live? Rarely we see flowers just in the farms cause the weather is not helpful to grow flowers.

✓ Where I live, we rarely see flowers except on farms because the weather is not suitable for growing flowers.

The original sentence contains incorrect question forms and awkward phrasing. 'Where are you?' and 'Where are I live?' are incorrect. The corrected sentence uses a proper statement structure. 'Cause' is informal and replaced with 'because'. 'Helpful to grow' is incorrect; 'suitable for growing' is the correct expression.

× Are you? Would you really take a photos for flowers? When I saw them and post it in social media accounts last week I bought a flower that I gave.

✓ Would you really take photos of flowers? When I saw them, I posted pictures on social media last week. I also bought a flower that I gave to someone.

The original sentence is confusing and contains pronoun misuse and incorrect article usage ('a photos'). 'Are you?' is irrelevant here and removed. 'Take a photos' is incorrect; 'take photos' is correct. 'Post it' should be 'posted pictures'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for grammar.

× My country, we always send flowers with the gift that we give to the people that we love and it's like expression for our emotions and feelings for that people.

✓ In my country, we always send flowers with gifts that we give to the people we love; it's an expression of our emotions and feelings for those people.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect article and preposition use. 'My country, we' is corrected to 'In my country, we'. 'The gift' changed to 'gifts' for generality. 'Like expression' corrected to 'an expression'. 'For that people' corrected to 'for those people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.