Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up any space. For example, having a flower pot in my room creates a pleasant atmosphere and boosts my mood.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and provides specific details, but adding a linking word would improve the flow. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases like 'used to' too often.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers and grew many in our backyard when we were kids. However, she didn't like it when we plucked them because she wanted to keep the garden beautiful.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'because' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: Not anymore, because over time, flowers have disappeared due to limited space at home and fewer farmers growing them in my area.

Gợi ý: There are some pronunciation and word choice errors here, such as 'Laura' instead of 'flowers' and 'the guy get a chance'. Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I don't take photos of flowers every day, but I enjoy photographing them whenever I get the chance because it is relaxing and inspiring.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'send lovers on Valentine's Day'. Try to use linking words and correct expressions to improve clarity and coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is a common gift in my country. For instance, people often give flowers to their girlfriends on Valentine's Day and to their mothers on Mother's Day.

× And also in my area there are very less farmers who farm flowers.

✓ And also in my area there are very few farmers who farm flowers.

The quantifier 'less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'farmers' is a countable noun. The correct quantifier for countable nouns is 'few'. Therefore, 'very less farmers' should be corrected to 'very few farmers'.

× No, I don't take photos of Laura in daily life but I like to click some pictures of flowers whenever the guy get a chance to do so.

✓ No, I don't take photos of flowers in daily life but I like to click some pictures of flowers whenever I get a chance to do so.

The word 'Laura' seems to be a typo or incorrect word instead of 'flowers'. Also, 'the guy get a chance' is incorrect; it should be 'I get a chance' to match the subject. Pronouns must agree with the subject and context.

× I love the smell of loud and also taking pictures of flowers can be very relaxing and motivating.

✓ I love the smell of flowers and also taking pictures of flowers can be very relaxing and motivating.

The word 'loud' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'flowers' to match the intended meaning. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity.

× It is very common to send lovers on Valentine's Day to your loved ones and people also give gift flowers to their mom and Mother's Day.

✓ It is very common to send flowers on Valentine's Day to your loved ones and people also give gift flowers to their mom on Mother's Day.

The phrase 'send lovers' is incorrect; it should be 'send flowers'. Also, 'to their mom and Mother's Day' is incorrect; it should be 'to their mom on Mother's Day'. Proper pronoun and preposition usage is necessary for clarity.