Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love flowers because it vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorb me and I always buy different types of flowers in the garden center.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Well, I'd say my mom loves flowers very much. She's absolutely passionate about gardening and thinks it's a rewarding hobby, especially after she retired because it helps her relax and enjoy nature.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
For you yes, because people think flowers is a symbol of love and appreciation so many people like flowers also they send flowers in their homes or their gardens and the community have the.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, I captured the beauty when I go for work because I think it's a relaxing hobby. What's more, I usually send photos on the social media, which I think is a good way for me to enhance my photo skills. Also, I send them with my friends which you can keep in touch with.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, people in my country always send flowers to others because people think that flowers is a symbol of luck and people can choose different types of flowers in particular occasions such as wedding and birthdays.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“it vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorb me”不符合英语表达习惯。建议加强语法基础,使用正确的句子结构,并避免冗余。可以简洁明了地表达喜欢花的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrances always attract me. I often buy different types of flowers from the garden center.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整且表达清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,例如使用“because”、“so”等。同时,可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Well, I'd say my mom loves flowers very much because she is absolutely passionate about gardening. After she retired, she found it to be a rewarding hobby that helps her relax and enjoy nature.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,句子结构混乱。建议学习基本句型,注意主谓一致,避免句子碎片化。回答时应直接回答问题,并用连贯的句子补充细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because people consider flowers as symbols of love and appreciation. Many people like to decorate their homes and gardens with flowers.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题,如“send photos on the social media”应为“post photos on social media”。建议注意动词搭配和句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go to work because I find it relaxing. Moreover, I usually post these photos on social media to improve my photography skills and share them with friends to stay in touch.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但存在语法错误,如“flowers is”应为“flowers are”。建议注意主谓一致,并使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because they believe flowers are symbols of luck. They choose different types of flowers for special occasions such as weddings and birthdays.
× Yes, I love flowers because it vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorb me and I always buy different types of flowers in the garden center.
✓ Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorbing to me, and I always buy different types of flowers in the garden center.
这里的主语是复数的“flowers”,所以应该用复数物主代词“their”,而不是单数“it”。另外,“absorb me”用法不当,应该用形容词形式“absorbing”并加介词“to”表示“吸引我”。
× For you yes, because people think flowers is a symbol of love and appreciation so many people like flowers also they send flowers in their homes or their gardens and the community have the.
✓ For you, yes, because people think flowers are a symbol of love and appreciation, so many people like flowers. Also, they send flowers to their homes or their gardens, and the community has them.
“flowers”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“the community have the”结构不完整,应该改为“the community has them”以保持主谓一致和表达完整。
× Yes, people in my country always send flowers to others because people think that flowers is a symbol of luck and people can choose different types of flowers in particular occasions such as wedding and birthdays.
✓ Yes, people in my country always send flowers to others because people think that flowers are a symbol of luck, and people can choose different types of flowers on particular occasions such as weddings and birthdays.
“flowers”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“wedding”应使用复数形式“weddings”,因为指多个场合。
× Yes, I love flowers because it vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorb me and I always buy different types of flowers in the garden center.
✓ Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors and fragrances are very absorbing to me, and I always buy different types of flowers at the garden center.
介词“in”用于“garden center”不太合适,通常用“at”表示在某个场所购买东西。
× Also, I send them with my friends which you can keep in touch with.
✓ Also, I send them to my friends so that we can keep in touch.
“send them with my friends”用法错误,正确表达是“send them to my friends”。“which you can keep in touch with”结构不清晰,改为“so that we can keep in touch”更通顺。
× Yes, I captured the beauty when I go for work because I think it's a relaxing hobby.
✓ Yes, I capture the beauty when I go to work because I think it's a relaxing hobby.
句子描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时“capture”,而不是过去时“captured”。
× Yes, I captured the beauty when I go for work because I think it's a relaxing hobby.
✓ Yes, I capture the beauty when I go to work because I think it's a relaxing hobby.
短语“go for work”不正确,正确表达是“go to work”。