Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“to touching, touching all approaching the flowers”不符合英语习惯。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and sakura. However, I am a bit allergic to them, so I have to be careful when I get close to flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“she she loves”，“But so do. But she is...”，表达不连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers a lot. My friend especially likes roses and sakura because of their beauty and fragrance, although she is slightly allergic to pollen.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但“attach great importance to flowers in their opinions”表达不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. People in my hometown value flowers highly because they believe flowers bring luck and wealth. They also appreciate flowers for their beauty and fragrance.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但“Sure, of course”重复，且句子结构可以更自然。建议避免重复表达，使用更流畅的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers. Even though I am busy with my studies and part-time jobs, I like to take time to enjoy and admire their beauty and fragrance.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但“People in my country are all big fans of flowers”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. In our culture, flowers symbolize luck, wealth, and best wishes, and we use them to express our feelings.

× I must be very careful to touching, touching all approaching the flowers.

✓ I must be very careful about touching, touching all approaching the flowers.

这里介词用法错误，'careful'后面应接介词'about'，而不是'to'。正确表达是'careful about touching'，表示对触摸花朵要小心。

× All my friends she she loves flowers very much, especially roses and Sakuna.

✓ All my friends love flowers very much, especially roses and Sakuna.

句中多余且错误地使用了代词'she she'，应去掉，主语为复数'all my friends'，动词用复数形式。

× But so do.

✓ But so do I.

句子缺少主语，'so do'后应加主语'I'，完整表达'我也是'的意思。

× But she is a little bit allergic to the pollen.

✓ But she is a little bit allergic to pollen.

'pollen'作为不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词'the'。

× People in my hometown attach great importance to flowers in their opinions.

✓ People in my hometown attach great importance to flowers in their culture.

'attach importance to'后面应接表示原因或背景的名词，'opinions'不合适，改为'culture'更符合语境。

× Although I'm always occupied with study and part time jobs, I want to enjoy my time with flowers, to admire their beauty and fragrance.

✓ Although I'm always occupied with studying and part-time jobs, I want to enjoy my time with flowers, to admire their beauty and fragrance.

'study'作为动名词应使用'-ing'形式'studying'，'part time'应连写为'part-time'作为形容词。

× People in my country are all big fans of flowers.

✓ People in my country are all big fans of flowers.

此句无明显量词错误，保持原句。

× We send all those flowers to express our emotions.

✓ We send those flowers to express our emotions.

'all those flowers'中'all'多余，'those flowers'已足够表达指代，去掉'all'更自然。