Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Well, I do like to appreciate them, but I don't like to raise them. But my mother, she likes to feed some flowers, plant them and wash them in the sunlight.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
As I have said before, my mother is the one who is very keen to plant flowers. Actually, in my house I have a balcony of flowers which are planted by my mother.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are plenty flowers in my house, in my living room, in my bedroom and in the balcony. And my mother like to decorate these rooms with flowers, so there's flowers everywhere.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, I hardly take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it is kind of weird to take photos to the flowers, which I mean is that every flowers look like us the same to me, so I don't have to do that.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, in China we always send flowers to each other to show our appreciation, to show the love, to show the regretness and the other emotions as well. For example, in someone's wedding, there must appears a lot of flowers to celebrate.
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Part 1
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“feed some flowers”和“wash them in the sunlight”，应使用更准确的表达。此外，回答较长且有些冗余，建议简洁明了地表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers and enjoy looking at them, but I don't usually grow them myself. My mother, however, enjoys planting and taking care of flowers on our balcony.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但表达稍显重复且不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复前文内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She has planted many beautiful flowers on our balcony at home.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“plenty flowers”应为“plenty of flowers”，“my mother like”应为“my mother likes”。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配，同时避免重复“flowers”。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are plenty of flowers in my house, including the living room, bedroom, and balcony. My mother likes to decorate these rooms with flowers, so they are everywhere.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“take photos to the flowers”和“every flowers look like us the same”。建议简化句子，表达清楚自己的观点。
Ví dụ: No, I rarely take photos of flowers because I think they all look similar, so I don't find it necessary.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误“regretness”和语法错误“there must appears”。建议注意拼写和主谓一致，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to express feelings like appreciation, love, or apology. For example, weddings are usually decorated with many flowers to celebrate the occasion.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes, there are plenty flowers in my house, in my living room, in my bedroom and in the balcony.
✓ Yes, there are plenty of flowers in my house, in my living room, in my bedroom and on the balcony.
这里缺少介词“of”，短语应为“plenty of flowers”，表示“许多花”。另外，“in the balcony”应改为“on the balcony”，因为阳台通常用介词“on”。
× And my mother like to decorate these rooms with flowers, so there's flowers everywhere.
✓ And my mother likes to decorate these rooms with flowers, so there are flowers everywhere.
主语是第三人称单数“my mother”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“likes”。另外，“there's flowers”应改为“there are flowers”，因为flowers是复数。
× For example, in someone's wedding, there must appears a lot of flowers to celebrate.
✓ For example, in someone's wedding, there must appear a lot of flowers to celebrate.
情态动词“must”后应接动词原形，不能加-s或其他形式，故“appears”应改为“appear”。
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