Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to it. When I smell it, I will feel uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, my grandmother is a good example. She love flowers very much. She think flowers can make her happy and relieve her stress.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, my hometown have a lot of flowers. They are busy and have a aromatics smell. People always love it.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it can relieve my suggestion and make me feel more closer with nature.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, and if a person send flowers to you in my hometown, that means she loves you and want to make friends with you.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性,例如将"I am allergic to it"改为"I am allergic to them",并避免重复表达,如"When I smell it, I will feel uncomfortable"可以简化为"Their scent makes me uncomfortable"。此外,回答可以更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to them. Their scent makes me uncomfortable, so I usually avoid being around them.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 注意主谓一致错误,如"She love"应为"She loves","She think"应为"She thinks"。回答可以更连贯,使用连接词如"because"来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers very much because she believes they can make her happy and help relieve her stress.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意语法错误,如"my hometown have"应为"my hometown has","a aromatics smell"应为"an aromatic smell"。"They are busy"用词不当,应描述花的特征。建议使用更具体的描述和连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown has many flowers. They bloom beautifully and give off an aromatic smell that people really enjoy.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了词汇错误,如"relieve my suggestion"应为"relieve my stress"或类似表达。"more closer"是重复比较,应改为"closer"。建议注意词汇准确性和语法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because it helps me relax and feel closer to nature.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 注意主谓一致,如"a person send"应为"a person sends","she loves you and want"应为"she loves you and wants"。回答可以更自然,避免重复"you",并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, in my hometown, if someone sends you flowers, it usually means they love you or want to be friends with you.
× No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to it.
✓ No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to them.
这里的flowers是复数,代词it应改为them,表示复数。
× When I smell it, I will feel uncomfortable.
✓ When I smell it, I feel uncomfortable.
这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时而不是将来时。
× She love flowers very much.
✓ She loves flowers very much.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词love应加-s。
× She think flowers can make her happy and relieve her stress.
✓ She thinks flowers can make her happy and relieve her stress.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词think应加-s。
× Yes, my hometown have a lot of flowers.
✓ Yes, my hometown has a lot of flowers.
hometown是单数,谓语动词have应改为has。
× They are busy and have a aromatics smell.
✓ They are abundant and have an aromatic smell.
flowers不能用busy形容,改为abundant(丰富的)更合适;aromatics应为形容词aromatic,且前面冠词a应改为an。
× People always love it.
✓ People always love them.
flowers是复数,代词it应改为them。
× I will take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it can relieve my suggestion and make me feel more closer with nature.
✓ I take photos of flowers in my daily life because I think it can relieve my stress and make me feel closer to nature.
这里用一般现在时更合适;suggestion应为stress(压力);more closer是错误的比较级表达,应为closer;feel后面搭配介词to。
× Yes, and if a person send flowers to you in my hometown, that means she loves you and want to make friends with you.
✓ Yes, and if a person sends flowers to you in my hometown, that means she loves you and wants to make friends with you.
主语a person是第三人称单数,动词send应加-s;want也应加-s。