Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you love flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they come in many beautiful colors and varieties. Each flower has its own unique meaning and people use them for different purposes, such as decoration or gifts.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain why your mom loves flowers and what she does with them. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mom loves flowers more than anyone else because she enjoys gardening. She takes good care of the plants, and when the flowers bloom, she often wears them in her hair or places them in front of the house.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat relevant but needs better coherence and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother loves gardening. She has planted various types of flowers, which makes our surroundings colorful and lively. I especially enjoy seeing different varieties of flowers every day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a direct response and explain your habit of taking photos with linking words. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my garden, thanks to my mother who maintains it. I upload these pictures on social media so that everyone can see the beautiful flowers, and I regularly update new types of flowers there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain how people use flowers in your country. Be specific about occasions or reasons for sending flowers.

Ví dụ: In my country, many people use flowers daily. They send flowers to others as gifts or use them to show devotion to their gods by placing flowers during religious ceremonies.

× Yes, I love flowers, they have a good male and.

✓ Yes, I love flowers; they have a good smell.

The word 'male' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'smell' to describe the scent of flowers. Also, the sentence should be separated properly with a semicolon or period to avoid a run-on sentence.

× Different colors of. Flowers and varieties we can see in this world where each human being served used.

✓ There are different colors and varieties of flowers that we can see in this world, and each human being uses these flowers according to their own needs.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It needs to be combined into a coherent sentence with correct subject-verb agreement and clear meaning.

× This flower by their own need. Please.

✓ These flowers are used according to their own needs.

The pronoun 'their' should refer to plural 'flowers' and the sentence needs to be completed properly. 'Please' is unnecessary and unclear here.

× My mom loves flower more than anyone because she like to.

✓ My mom loves flowers more than anyone because she likes to.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. Also, 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× Garden ING the flowers by taking a good care of them,

✓ garden the flowers by taking good care of them,

The word 'Garden ING' is incorrect; it should be 'garden' as a verb in base form here. Also, 'a good care' should be 'good care' without 'a'.

× after a flower blooms from the plant, she take that flower and put it on a head or.

✓ after a flower blooms from the plant, she takes that flower and puts it on her head or

The verbs 'take' and 'put' should be in third person singular present tense 'takes' and 'puts' to agree with 'she' and the present tense context.

× In front of.

✓ in front of her.

The phrase 'In front of.' is incomplete and needs an object to complete the meaning.

× Is there a lot of flowers where I live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where I live?

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the correct form is 'Are there' instead of 'Is there'.

× She has planted many different types of flowers and species which makes it colorful and livingly.

✓ She has planted many different types of flowers and species which make it colorful and lively.

'Species' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'livingly' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'lively'.

× Especially enjoy seeing varieties of flowers. In. Day-to-day life.

✓ I especially enjoy seeing varieties of flowers in day-to-day life.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject. It should be combined into a complete sentence.

× I want to thank my mother. Because of her I have a good garden with varieties of lovers.

✓ I want to thank my mother because of her I have a good garden with varieties of flowers.

The word 'lovers' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'flowers'. Also, the sentence should be combined properly without a period after 'mother'.

× And I take those. Flower pictures of flower and uploading the social medias for views where each and everyone sees those flowers and I will be updating a new type of flowers in social media.

✓ And I take pictures of those flowers and upload them on social media for everyone to see, and I will be updating new types of flowers on social media.

The sentence has plural and singular inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'Flower pictures of flower' is incorrect; it should be 'pictures of those flowers'. 'Uploading the social medias' should be 'upload them on social media'. Also, 'a new type of flowers' should be 'new types of flowers'.

× In my in my country. Every single person use flowers in their day-to-day life, whether they want to give.

✓ In my country, every single person uses flowers in their day-to-day life, whether they want to give them to someone or

The phrase 'In my in my country.' is repetitive and should be 'In my country,'. The verb 'use' should be 'uses' to agree with 'every single person'. Also, 'give' should be followed by 'them' to refer to flowers.

× Someone or else they want to. Show that devoted to their gods by. Putting flowers on them or for the core purpose they use.

✓ someone else or they want to show their devotion to their gods by putting flowers on them, or for other purposes they use flowers.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and completeness.