Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I love flowers" instead of "I love of flowers." Also, use past or present tense consistently, e.g., "I feel very relaxed" instead of "I felt." Keep your answer natural and concise, within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I often visit the park to see beautiful flowers because they make me feel very relaxed and happy.

Gợi ý: Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. For example, use "she often buys flowers and grows them in my garden." Also, avoid vague phrases like "I pleasure it"; instead, say "I enjoy seeing them." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much because she often buys flowers and grows them in our garden. I enjoy seeing the beautiful flowers she takes care of.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct subject-verb agreement, e.g., "My hometown has a big park." Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Be specific about the types of flowers and why the place is beautiful. Keep your answer coherent and logical.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My hometown has a big park with various flowers, such as sakura and azaleas. It is a very beautiful place, and I enjoy visiting it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Use clear sentences and correct vocabulary. For example, say "My favourite garden is Shinjuku Gyoen, and I often take photos of flowers there because they are very beautiful." Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My favourite garden is Shinjuku Gyoen, and I often take photos of flowers there because they are very beautiful. I enjoy capturing their colours and shapes.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity. For example, say "Yes, people in Japan often give flowers to show kindness." Also, avoid fragmented sentences and be specific about reasons for giving flowers. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, people in Japan often give flowers to show kindness and affection. For example, I often give flowers to my best friend to express my love and appreciation.

× I love of flowers.

✓ I love flowers.

The verb 'love' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. Using 'of' after 'love' is incorrect in this context.

× When I see many flowers, I felt very relaxed.

✓ When I see many flowers, I feel very relaxed.

The sentence mixes present tense 'see' with past tense 'felt'. To maintain consistency, both verbs should be in the present tense.

× she often buy some flowers and a grow up at my garden.

✓ she often buys some flowers and grows them in my garden.

The third person singular subject 'she' requires the verbs to be in third person singular form: 'buys' and 'grows'. Also, 'a grow up' is incorrect; 'grows them' is appropriate.

× The flower is very beautiful so I pleasure it when I see them.

✓ The flowers are very beautiful so I enjoy them when I see them.

'Pleasure' is a noun, not a verb. The correct verb is 'enjoy'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'them'.

× My hometown have a big park, so there are many kinds of flowers suggest sakura and each hole and so on.

✓ My hometown has a big park, so there are many kinds of flowers such as sakura and each holly and so on.

The singular subject 'My hometown' requires the verb 'has'. Also, 'suggest' is incorrect; 'such as' is the correct phrase to introduce examples. 'Each hole' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'each holly' or another flower name is likely intended.

× So it is a very beautiful overseas and I'm looking forward to seeing each other because the.

✓ So it is a very beautiful place overseas and I'm looking forward to seeing it again.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Overseas' is an adverb or adjective but needs a noun like 'place'. 'Seeing each other' is inappropriate here; 'seeing it again' fits the context.

× My favorite guarding is Shinjuku go in when I when I go to change it go and I often take photos about about flowers.

✓ My favorite garden is Shinjuku Gyoen. When I go there, I often take photos of flowers.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'guarding' should be 'garden', 'Shinjuku go in' is 'Shinjuku Gyoen', and 'take photos about about flowers' should be 'take photos of flowers'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× It is very little very beautiful so. My favorite picture. Is.

✓ It is very beautiful and small. It is my favorite picture.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into coherent sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, they do a Japanese give. Gave some flowers too. Their kindness, people.

✓ Yes, they do. Japanese people give flowers to show kindness.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain tense errors. 'Gave' is past tense and does not fit here; 'give' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× For example, I often give him some flowers to my best friend because I I want to.

✓ For example, I often give some flowers to my best friend because I want to.

The phrase 'give him some flowers to my best friend' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' before the recipient. Also, 'him' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× Convey about my love. 2.

✓ convey my love.

The phrase 'convey about my love' is incorrect; 'convey' is a transitive verb and does not require 'about'. The number '2' is extraneous and removed.