Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意单词拼写和用词准确。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体描述来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I have planted some in my study and living room. Although it takes time to care for them, I enjoy watching them grow and smelling their fragrance.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误，句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, my cousin Jeffrey loves flowers. Last summer, he planted many sunflowers and roses in his backyard. I enjoy visiting because his garden is colorful and beautiful. He even installed an automatic watering system to take better care of his plants.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子，避免不必要的重复，并使用恰当的连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My cousin Jeff plants beautiful flowers in his backyard. Also, my school has a lovely garden with various plants. Seeing these flowers makes me feel happy, and I believe they are good for the environment.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更简洁的句子，注意时态和词汇的正确使用，并保持句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I take photos of flowers, especially in summer. When I walk outside, I often see beautiful flowers decorating shops, so I take pictures and share them with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免口语化的填充词，使表达更正式和连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers during special occasions such as weddings, proposals, birthdays, or when elderly people recover from hospital. Flowers are sent to express good luck and best wishes.

× I plant some flowers in the parts in my study an some parts in the living room inside the TV.

✓ I plant some flowers in the pots in my study and some parts in the living room inside the TV.

这里的 'parts' 应该是 'pots'，表示花盆。'parts' 是部分的意思，语境不符。应使用复数形式 'pots' 来表示多个花盆。

× I think it's like time consuming but it was like the worldly after seeing these flowers like growing and well and pretty and even just now the sent from them.

✓ I think it's time-consuming but it was worthwhile after seeing these flowers growing well and looking pretty, and even just now the scent from them.

'time consuming' 应该用连字符连接成为形容词 'time-consuming'。'like the worldly' 应为 'worthwhile'，表示值得的。'like growing and well and pretty' 结构混乱，应改为 'growing well and looking pretty'。'sent' 应为 'scent'，表示花香。

× My cousin Jeffrey drops flowers.

✓ My cousin Jeffrey grows flowers.

'drops flowers' 语义不通，应该是 'grows flowers'，表示种植花。

× He was a bake backyard where he planted many sunflowers and roses last summer.

✓ He had a backyard where he planted many sunflowers and roses last summer.

'was a bake backyard' 语法错误，应为 'had a backyard'，表示拥有一个后院。

× He even bought a motor automatic watering system to better taking care of his plants.

✓ He even bought a motor automatic watering system to better take care of his plants.

'to better taking care' 结构错误，应该是 'to better take care'，不需要动名词形式。

× Yes they are.

✓ Yes, there are.

回答 'Are there a lot of flowers?' 应用 'Yes, there are.' 而不是 'Yes they are.'，因为主语是 'flowers'，需要用 'there are' 表示存在。

× I think my cousin Jeff is a big fan of flower so he plans a lot of beautiful flowers and decorations in his backyard.

✓ I think my cousin Jeff is a big fan of flowers so he plants a lot of beautiful flowers and decorations in his backyard.

'fan of flower' 应为复数 'fan of flowers'。'plans a lot of beautiful flowers' 应为 'plants a lot of beautiful flowers'，因为 'plant' 是种植的意思。

× Also my school is a lovely garden with various plants and flowers at like.

✓ Also, my school has a lovely garden with various plants and flowers.

'at like' 位置和用法错误，应去掉，改为 'has a lovely garden'。

× Every time I step out the debris I'm encountered his beautiful scenes which makes me just feel pleasant and enjoyable.

✓ Every time I step outside, I encounter beautiful scenes which make me feel pleasant and happy.

句子结构混乱，'step out the debris' 不通顺，应为 'step outside'。'I'm encountered' 应为主动语态 'I encounter'。'his beautiful scenes' 改为 'beautiful scenes' 更自然。'makes me just feel pleasant and enjoyable' 改为 'make me feel pleasant and happy'。

× And I think all of us to think is a good for the environment.

✓ And I think all of us think it is good for the environment.

'all of us to think is a good' 语法错误，应为 'all of us think it is good'。

× Yes, sometimes I do like when now summertime, so I think most of the summer time I spend some days walking out of the street and every time I spar some beautiful flower like on the wars for decoration of some shops, I just take a snap and sharing to my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do, like now in summertime. I think most of the summer time I spend some days walking on the street, and every time I spot some beautiful flowers like on the walls for decoration of some shops, I just take a snap and share it with my friends.

'walking out of the street' 应为 'walking on the street'。'spar some beautiful flower' 应为 'spot some beautiful flowers'。'wars' 应为 'walls'。'sharing to my friends' 应为 'share it with my friends'。

× Well, I think so. I like every time that people celebrate for a big events like a. A wedding party or like proposal or even their case with, you know, celebrate a birthday or the elderly people get out from hospitals.

✓ Well, I think so. I like that every time people celebrate big events like a wedding party, a proposal, or even cases like celebrating a birthday or elderly people getting out of hospitals.

'a big events' 应为 'big events' 或 'a big event'。'like a. A wedding party' 断句错误。'their case with' 语义不清，应改为 'cases like'。'get out from hospitals' 应为 'get out of hospitals'。

× Yeah, they just send flowers to represent. Good luck. Send best wishes.

✓ Yeah, they just send flowers to represent good luck and send best wishes.

句子断裂，'to represent. Good luck.' 应合并为 'to represent good luck'。