Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“sign rose is a recharge my energy”表达不准确。建议使用更自然流畅的句子，并注意句子结构完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they help me feel relaxed and connected to nature. For example, when I smell fresh roses, they recharge my energy and lift my mood.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“She buy. Opondo flowers”和“improves her moves”表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: My mom loves flowers. She buys fresh flowers every weekend to decorate our house. She says that watching the vibrant colors of flowers really improves her mood.

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性，句子断裂且表达不完整。建议使用连词连接句子，丰富细节，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In my community, there are different kinds of flowers and plants planted in the neighborhood, which makes it really beautiful.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有些语法错误，如“open take photos”和“positive influence of my mood”。建议注意动词搭配和介词使用，使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I often take photos of flowers whenever I see them because they have a positive influence on my mood. For example, their vibrant colors and delicate shapes always uplift my spirits and brighten my day. Taking these photos also helps me appreciate nature more closely.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和句子断裂，如“teacher stain”。建议使用正确的词汇和连贯的句子表达，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like Teacher's Day, Mother's Day, and Valentine's Day. It is a good way to show love and appreciation to their loved ones.

× Yes. I'm a big fan of flowers. Because they help me feel more relaxed and connected to the nature for example.

✓ Yes. I'm a big fan of flowers because they help me feel more relaxed and connected to nature, for example.

句子中“Because”不应单独成句，应与前句合并，且“the nature”中的冠词“the”不必要，应直接用“nature”。

× When I smell fresh flowers, sign rose is a recharge my energy and lifts my mood.

✓ When I smell fresh flowers, the scent of roses recharges my energy and lifts my mood.

原句中“sign rose is a recharge”语法错误，应为“the scent of roses recharges”，动词需用第三人称单数形式。

× My mom loves flowers. She buy. Opondo flowers every weekend to decorate our house.

✓ My mom loves flowers. She buys Opondo flowers every weekend to decorate our house.

主语是第三人称单数“She”，动词“buy”应加-s变为“buys”。

× She says that. Watching those vibrant cloud colors of flowers can really improves her moves.

✓ She says that watching those vibrant colors of flowers can really improve her mood.

“improves”应为动词原形“improve”因为前面有情态动词“can”；“moves”应为“mood”；“cloud colors”不合适，去掉“cloud”。

× Yes, in my home. There are many photos that have flowers inside.

✓ Yes, in my home there are many photos that have flowers in them.

“in my home”与后句断开，造成句子不连贯，应合并；“inside”用法不当，改为“in them”。

× In the community I live. There are different kinds of flowers. And plans. Planting in my neighborhood which really beautiful.

✓ In the community I live in, there are different kinds of flowers and plants planted in my neighborhood, which is really beautiful.

句子断裂，需合并；“plans”应为“plants”；“planting”应改为“planted”；缺少“which is”。

× Absolutely. I open take photos of flowers whenever I see them because they have positive influence of my mood.

✓ Absolutely. I often take photos of flowers whenever I see them because they have a positive influence on my mood.

“open”应为“often”；“influence of”应为“influence on”；缺少冠词“a”。

× For example. Their vibrant colors and delicate shapes always uplift my spirits and can really brighten up my day.

✓ For example, their vibrant colors and delicate shapes always uplift my spirits and can really brighten up my day.

句子断开，应用逗号连接；无代词错误。

× Taking these photos also helps me appreciate nature more closely.

✓ Taking these photos also helps me appreciate nature more closely.

句子无语法错误。

× Yes. They send flowers mostly in some special occasions like the teacher stain or Mother's Day.

✓ Yes. They mostly send flowers on some special occasions like Teacher's Day or Mother's Day.

“mostly”位置调整；“teacher stain”应为“Teacher's Day”；介词“in”应为“on”。

× For Valentine's Day. And it is a good way. To show their love and appreciation to their loved ones. Yes.

✓ For Valentine's Day, and it is a good way to show their love and appreciation to their loved ones.

句子断裂，应合并成完整句子。