Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the types of flowers or activities you enjoyed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved flowers since I was young. We had a small garden in front of our house, almost like a balcony. My grandma used to plant various types of flowers there, and I enjoyed spending summer evenings admiring them.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. Avoid confusing phrases and provide clear supporting details with linking words. Also, correct sentence structure to improve naturalness.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother is very fond of flowers. She especially loves jasmine flowers. We also like hibiscus, which we use during worship of Lord Lakshmi Mata. Additionally, my mother plants different flowers like roses, jasmines, and lilies in our garden.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about the flowers and seasons, and avoid unclear phrases like 'red process' and 'Caesars'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my grandmother and mother love gardening. Depending on the season, we have various flowers such as hibiscus, jasmine, lilies, and roses, which are quite popular in our area.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about when and why you take photos of flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use an application called Snapchat to take photos. Sometimes, I capture pictures of beautiful roses and lilies during the evenings, which my friends really like. I also take photos of flowers that are just starting to bloom.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain cultural practices clearly and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, in Indian culture, giving jasmine flowers is a common way to show love. Many housewives, especially in rural areas, follow this tradition as a symbol of affection and respect.

× Yes, I love flowers from a younger age.

✓ Yes, I have loved flowers since a younger age.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'love' with a time expression referring to the past. The present perfect tense 'have loved' is appropriate to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× We used to have a garden in front of our house. Yeah, it is like a small balcony there.

✓ We used to have a garden in front of our house. Actually, it was like a small balcony.

The phrase 'Yeah, it is like a small balcony there' is awkward and unclear. Replacing 'Yeah' with 'Actually' and changing 'is' to 'was' matches the past context and improves clarity.

× My grandma used to plant different types of laws which which I would love to spend time in the evenings during the evenings in the summer.

✓ My grandma used to plant different types of flowers where I would love to spend time during the evenings in summer.

The word 'laws' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'. Also, 'which which' is a repetition error. The phrase 'during the evenings in the summer' is redundant; 'during the evenings in summer' is sufficient.

× Yes my mother is found or flowers.

✓ Yes, my mother is fond of flowers.

The phrase 'found or flowers' is a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'fond of flowers' to express liking.

× She loves the Jasmine flowers the most among the oil and we also love the hibiscus which we used to worship Lord Lakshmi Mata it form and we also have my mother also plan different types of flowers like roses, jasmines and Lily 2.

✓ She loves Jasmine flowers the most among all, and we also love hibiscus, which we use to worship Lord Lakshmi Mata. My mother also plants different types of flowers like roses, jasmines, and lilies.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'among the oil' should be 'among all'; 'which we used to worship Lord Lakshmi Mata it form' is unclear and corrected to 'which we use to worship Lord Lakshmi Mata'; 'have my mother also plan' should be 'my mother also plants'; 'Lily 2' is corrected to 'lilies'.

× Of course, yes, my grandmother and my mother are very much found in flowers.

✓ Of course, yes, my grandmother and my mother are very fond of flowers.

The phrase 'very much found in flowers' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'very fond of flowers' to indicate liking.

× So we do have a lot of types of various kinds of flowers that season in depending on the Caesars.

✓ So we do have many types of various kinds of flowers that bloom depending on the seasons.

The phrase 'a lot of types of various kinds' is redundant; 'many types of various kinds' is better. 'That season in depending on the Caesars' is unclear and corrected to 'that bloom depending on the seasons'.

× We have flowers like hibiscus, Jasmine, Lily and red process which are very famous in our locality because of it.

✓ We have flowers like hibiscus, jasmine, lily, and red roses which are very famous in our locality because of them.

'Red process' is a mishearing of 'red roses'. Also, 'because of it' should be 'because of them' referring to the flowers.

× Yes, I have it a application that uses Snapchat.

✓ Yes, I have an application that uses Snapchat.

The article 'it a' is incorrect; it should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, 'uses Snapchat' is acceptable if the app integrates Snapchat features.

× I do maintain streets in that and sometimes.

✓ I do maintain streaks in that sometimes.

The word 'streets' is incorrect; the intended word is 'streaks' referring to Snapchat streaks. Also, 'and sometimes' is redundant and corrected to 'sometimes'.

× I click photos of the beautiful rose flowers and Lily flowers in some during some evenings that my friends like the most.

✓ I click photos of beautiful rose and lily flowers during some evenings, which my friends like the most.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundancy. 'Rose flowers and Lily flowers' is simplified to 'rose and lily flowers'. 'In some during some evenings' is corrected to 'during some evenings'. The relative clause is clarified.

× I also clicked a very bad flowers that are blooming.

✓ I also clicked some very beautiful flowers that are blooming.

The phrase 'very bad flowers' is likely a mishearing or error; 'very beautiful flowers' fits the context better.

× Yes, in Indian culture there is a a sign of showing love by giving the Jasmine flowers to each other.

✓ Yes, in Indian culture there is a sign of showing love by giving jasmine flowers to each other.

The repeated 'a a' is a typo. Also, 'the Jasmine flowers' is corrected to 'jasmine flowers' as a general reference.

× Most of the housewife or the countryside housewife does this method.

✓ Most housewives or countryside housewives do this.

'Housewife' should be plural 'housewives' to match 'most'. 'Does this method' is awkward; 'do this' is better.

× It's assigned of giving love and if I need to. One other.

✓ It's a sign of giving love, and if needed, one can give to others.

'Assigned' is incorrect; it should be 'a sign'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; corrected for clarity and grammar.