Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using simpler and more accurate expressions. Avoid redundancy and focus on a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, say "Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty to nature with their vibrant colours."

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty to nature with their vibrant colours. They make the environment more pleasant and cheerful.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "Yes, my sister loves flowers. She waters them every morning and evening and spends a lot of time in our garden because she feels connected to nature."

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She waters them every morning and evening and spends a lot of time in our garden because she feels connected to nature.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, we have a garden at home with many flowers. They beautify the environment with their bright and contrasting colours. I enjoy spending my evenings sitting in the garden."

Ví dụ: Yes, we have a garden at home with many flowers. They beautify the environment with their bright and contrasting colours. I enjoy spending my evenings sitting in the garden.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use simple sentences and correct grammar. For example, "Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when the weather is nice. I enjoy photographing nature because it inspires me."

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, especially when the weather is nice. I enjoy photographing nature because it inspires me.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more structured by using a topic sentence and supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar errors. For example, "Yes, people in my country often send flowers because they have many meanings. Flowers can express friendship, love, and help build relationships."

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers because they have many meanings. Flowers can express friendship, love, and help build relationships.

× Yes, I love flowers because it beautifies its nature and because of the different colors it glories the beautiful impact on the nature.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they beautify nature and because of the different colors they glorify the beautiful impact on nature.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verbs should be in the third person plural form ('beautify' instead of 'beautifies', 'glorify' instead of 'glories'). Also, 'nature' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× Yes, I know different individuals who loves flowers, but the one in my family is my sister because every morning and every evening she she waters the flowers and she spends most of the time in our garden where she beautifies and significantly she spends most of the time with the nature because she had a different connection with an H.

✓ Yes, I know different individuals who love flowers, but the one in my family is my sister because every morning and every evening she waters the flowers and she spends most of the time in our garden where she beautifies it and significantly spends most of the time with nature because she has a different connection with it.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'individuals' which is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Also, 'she had' should be 'she has' to maintain present tense. 'The nature' should be 'nature' without 'the'. The phrase 'connection with an H' is unclear; assuming 'it' refers to nature. Repeated 'she' is a typo and removed. Added 'it' after 'beautifies' for clarity.

× Yes, we have a garden at home where we had planted a lot of flowers because it beautifies the nature and hadn't significant impact on the environment.

✓ Yes, we have a garden at home where we have planted a lot of flowers because they beautify nature and have a significant impact on the environment.

The past perfect 'had planted' is changed to present perfect 'have planted' to indicate an action relevant to the present. 'It beautifies the nature' should be 'they beautify nature' because 'flowers' is plural and 'nature' is uncountable without 'the'. 'Hadn't significant impact' is incorrect; it should be 'have a significant impact' to agree with present perfect and plural subject.

× It beautifies it's different colors, which is more beautiful and have a contrasting colors.

✓ They beautify with their different colors, which are more beautiful and have contrasting colors.

'It' should be 'they' to refer to plural 'flowers'. 'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' but here possessive 'its' is needed; however, better to say 'with their different colors'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'colors'. 'Have a contrasting colors' is incorrect; 'have contrasting colors' is correct without 'a'.

× I love these flowers and I spend most of the time in the evening with nature by sitting in the garden.

✓ I love these flowers and I spend most of my time in the evening with nature by sitting in the garden.

Added 'my' before 'time' for correct possessive usage.

× Yes, sometimes when the weather is so cool, I love to take the pictures of flowers in my daily life because I love to take photographs of nature because it had a significant impact comma photographie as my application is photograph photography, so I'll have to take pictures of the nature of the most.

✓ Yes, sometimes when the weather is cool, I love to take pictures of flowers in my daily life because I love to take photographs of nature as it has a significant impact. Photography is my hobby, so I take pictures of nature the most.

Removed unnecessary 'so' and corrected 'had' to 'has' for present tense. Fixed sentence structure for clarity. 'Photographie as my application is photograph photography' is unclear; replaced with 'Photography is my hobby'. 'I'll have to take pictures of the nature of the most' corrected to 'I take pictures of nature the most' for natural expression.

× Yes, I think that in my country flowers Adam significant impact on the people because flowers are mostly given to someone as it beautifies the impact it has several meanings like to give to someone who is a friend to build connections like in a relationship or different impacts that the flash show to build relationship and one another because flowers had a beautiful impact.

✓ Yes, I think that in my country flowers have a significant impact on people because flowers are mostly given to someone as they beautify the environment. They have several meanings, like giving to a friend to build connections, such as in a relationship, or different impacts that flowers show to build relationships with one another because flowers have a beautiful impact.

Corrected 'Adam' to 'have' for subject-verb agreement. Changed 'it beautifies the impact' to 'they beautify the environment' for clarity. Changed 'flash' to 'flowers'. Changed 'had' to 'have' to maintain present tense. Improved sentence structure for clarity and grammatical correctness.