Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“careful”应为“colorful”或其他形容词，且句子不够连贯。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免冗余，并注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and colorful. They make me feel relaxed and happy whenever I see them. In fact, I hope to plant some flowers in my garden soon.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“flower”应为“flowers”，“post. Tim”应为“puts them”。建议使用连贯的句子结构，并注意拼写和语法的准确性。

Ví dụ: My mother loves flowers very much because she is a flower enthusiast. She usually buys fresh flowers and places them around the house to create a relaxing atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱，如“I'm leaving rename province”不清楚。建议直接回答问题，使用完整且连贯的句子，避免断句错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I live in a province that has the biggest flower market in Asia. Flowers are everywhere, so it is very convenient to buy them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法有误，如“I'm enjoying”应为“I enjoy”，“My Instagram always post”应为“my Instagram always posts”。建议注意时态和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy seeing animals and nature, so I usually take photos of flowers. I often post these photos on my Instagram.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，如“my name”应为“many”，“a tiled budget”应为“a tight budget”。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, many people in my country often choose flowers as gifts because they are affordable. Recently, I was on a tight budget, so I sent some flowers to my classmate as a gift, and she loved it.

× I love flowers very much because they are not only beautiful but also careful.

✓ I love flowers very much because they are not only beautiful but also colorful.

这里使用了形容词“careful”，但语境中应表达花的颜色丰富，正确形容词应为“colorful”。“careful”是形容人小心谨慎的，不适用于描述花。

× In fact, I hope I can plant mining flowers in my.

✓ In fact, I hope I can plant many flowers in my garden.

句子结构不完整，缺少名词“garden”，且“mining”应为“many”，表示数量。

× My mother loves flower very much because she is a flower person.

✓ My mother loves flowers very much because she is a flower person.

“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”，表示一般意义上的花。

× She usually buys some fresh flower and post.

✓ She usually buys some fresh flowers and pots.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”，且“post”应为“pots”，表示花盆。

× She usually buys some fresh flower and post. Tim around the house to create a relaxing atomsphere.

✓ She usually buys some fresh flowers and pots to put around the house to create a relaxing atmosphere.

“Tim”应为“to put”，“atomsphere”拼写错误，应为“atmosphere”。

× Yes, of course I'm leaving rename province there is the biggest flower market.

✓ Yes, of course I live in Renmin Province where there is the biggest flower market.

“I'm leaving”应为“I live”，表示现在的居住状态；“rename”应为“Renmin”，地名拼写错误。

× In Asia, so. We can. See the flowers everywhere and it's very convenient to buy them.

✓ In Asia, so we can see flowers everywhere and it's very convenient to buy them.

句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。

× Yes, of course I'm enjoying seeing the animals and nature so I usually take photos of flowers.

✓ Yes, of course I enjoy seeing animals and nature, so I usually take photos of flowers.

“I'm enjoying seeing”时态和表达不自然，改为一般现在时“enjoy”；“the animals”改为“animals”，泛指。

× My Instagram always post some photos of flowers.

✓ My Instagram always posts some photos of flowers.

主语“My Instagram”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“posts”。

× Yes, my name. People in my country often choose flowers. As a gift because they are not expensive.

✓ Yes, many people in my country often choose flowers as a gift because they are not expensive.

“my name”应为“many”，表示数量；句子断裂，应合并。

× Recently I have been on a tiled budget.

✓ Recently I have been on a tight budget.

“tiled”拼写错误，应为“tight”，表示“紧张的”。

× I send a some flowers as a gift for my classmate.

✓ I sent some flowers as a gift to my classmate.

“a some”错误，去掉“a”；时态应为过去时“sent”；介词应为“to”。

× She loved it.

✓ She loved it.

句子正确，无需修改。