Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or confusing statements. Use simple and correct sentences to express your feelings about flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much. They are beautiful and bring happiness to my life. For example, I enjoy gardening and often keep fresh flowers at home to brighten the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but some sentences are incomplete or unclear. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas. Try to give more specific details about your mother's love for flowers and avoid grammatical mistakes.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers and enjoys gardening. Whenever the flowers bloom, she takes pictures of them. Recently, we had beautiful flowers in our veranda, and she kept taking photos because they looked sweet and fresh.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct answer with specific examples of flowers in different seasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live in Bangladesh, especially during summer. We can see various colorful flowers like sunflowers and marigolds. In winter, some flowers still bloom, adding beauty to the environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is mostly clear but some sentences are awkward. Avoid contradictory words like 'displeasing' when you mean the opposite. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love their beauty. Whenever I see a vibrant flower, I take a picture to remember it. Looking at these photos makes me feel peaceful and happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly by using correct sentence structures and linking words. Give specific examples about when people send flowers in your country.

Ví dụ: In my country, young people often send flowers to each other on special occasions like anniversaries or birthdays. However, older people do this less often. In my family, we usually give flowers to show love and appreciation.

× I love flower.

✓ I love flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the speaker is talking about flowers in general, not a single flower. In English, when referring to things in general, the plural form is used.

× Today, more flowers.

✓ Today, there are more flowers.

The sentence lacks a verb and subject. Adding 'there are' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× This mean the same that loops of the flowers are mesmerising.

✓ This means the same that loops of the flowers are mesmerizing.

The verb 'mean' should be in third person singular form 'means' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'mesmerising' is the British spelling; 'mesmerizing' is American English but both are acceptable. The sentence structure is awkward; however, only grammar corrections are applied.

× For every occasion I use flower, I love to keep flower with me.

✓ For every occasion I use flowers, I love to keep flowers with me.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× Flower dies.

✓ Flowers die.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural verb 'die' and to refer generally to flowers.

× Whenever it's blooms, flower.

✓ Whenever it blooms, flowers appear.

The sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'It's' should be 'it' and 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Added 'appear' to complete the sentence.

× Recently we had it's sweet, beautiful in our veranda and she keep taking photos of that.

✓ Recently we had sweet, beautiful flowers in our veranda and she kept taking photos of them.

'It's' is incorrect here; it should be removed. 'She keep' should be 'she kept' for past tense. 'That' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'.

× I live in Bangladesh so here is a lots of flower, especially in summer.

✓ I live in Bangladesh so here are lots of flowers, especially in summer.

'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'lots of flowers'. 'A lots' is incorrect; 'lots' does not need 'a'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× We can see 5 green colors around us.

✓ We can see 5 shades of green around us.

'Colors' is acceptable but 'shades of green' is more natural. However, only grammar corrections are applied; 'colors' is plural and correct.

× Heading there in winters there also many kinds of flowers like jump from only cash sunflower.

✓ Heading there in winters, there are also many kinds of flowers like sunflower.

The sentence is fragmented and confusing. Added 'there are' to complete the sentence. Removed unclear phrase 'jump from only cash' as it is not grammatically correct.

× In summer there is you lose yellow flower.

✓ In summer there are yellow flowers.

'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'flowers'. 'You lose' is incorrect and removed for clarity.

× Whenever I see a beautiful and vibrant looking flower, I keep a photograph of that I'll find displeasing and very mesmerizing.

✓ Whenever I see a beautiful and vibrant-looking flower, I keep a photograph of it because I find it pleasing and very mesmerizing.

'Vibrant looking' should be hyphenated as 'vibrant-looking'. 'That I'll find displeasing' is incorrect; changed to 'because I find it pleasing'. 'That' changed to 'it' to refer to the flower.

× I feel peace after seeing the photos I took earlier.

✓ I feel peace after seeing the photos I took earlier.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I think people in my country, especially young generation, same flower to each other, but I don't see many older people.

✓ I think people in my country, especially the young generation, send flowers to each other, but I don't see many older people doing so.

'Same flower' is incorrect; should be 'send flowers'. Added 'the' before 'young generation'. Added 'doing so' for clarity.

× In my family specially they don't change flower to each other for younger son, they do because of their loves, anniversary etc.

✓ In my family, especially, they don't exchange flowers with each other for the younger son; they do so because of their love, anniversaries, etc.

'Change flower' is incorrect; should be 'exchange flowers'. Added commas for clarity. 'Loves' should be 'love'. 'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries'.