Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“give off of present fragrance that”不符合英语习惯，且“grooving”应为“growing”。建议注意语法和词汇的正确使用，保持句子简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they give off a pleasant fragrance that makes people feel happy and relaxed. I especially enjoy growing flowers on my balcony at home, where I water them every day.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“flash and with new flowers”和“She Fridays so relaxing”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达。

Ví dụ: My mom loves flowers very much because she enjoys decorating her garden. For example, almost every week she goes to the flower shop to buy fresh and new flowers. She finds it very relaxing.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“No down”和“rentier single accommodation”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达。

Ví dụ: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I stay in a small rented single room near my college. Since I am very busy with my studies, I don't have enough time to grow any flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“where a lot of flowers are group”，且句子衔接不够自然。建议使用连词连接句子，并注意动词形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers on my way from home to college because there is a beautiful park where many flowers grow. It makes me happy to capture these beautiful moments.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“Boys in my country usually sends flowers too. The people he loved on Valentine's Day.”建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性，避免断句错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is very common among couples and lovers. For example, boys in my country usually send flowers to the people they love on Valentine's Day. The girls who receive the flowers usually feel delighted.

× Yes, I love flowers because they give off of present fragrance that.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they give off a pleasant fragrance.

句中 'give off of present fragrance that' 结构不正确，'give off' 后不需要介词 'of'，且 'present' 应为形容词 'pleasant'，表示令人愉快的香味。应改为 'give off a pleasant fragrance'。

× I especially enjoy grooving flowers on the balcony at home where I watered down every day.

✓ I especially enjoy growing flowers on the balcony at home where I water them every day.

'grooving' 是拼写错误，应为 'growing'。'watered down' 意思是稀释，不符合语境，应为 'water them'。时态应为一般现在时，表示习惯动作。

× My mom loves flowers very much because she enjoys decorating her garden.

✓ My mom loves flowers very much because she enjoys decorating her garden.

该句无明显语法错误，符合语法规范。

× For example, almost every week she goes to the flower shop to look for flash and with new flowers.

✓ For example, almost every week she goes to the flower shop to look for fresh and new flowers.

'flash' 应为形容词 'fresh'，表示新鲜的。'and with' 结构错误，应去掉 'with'。

× She Fridays so relaxing.

✓ She finds it so relaxing.

原句结构混乱，'Fridays' 是名词，不能作动词。应改为 'She finds it so relaxing'，表达她觉得这很放松。

× No down, not many flowers where I live because I stay in the rentier single accommodation near my college which is too small since I'm very busy with my studies.

✓ No, there are not many flowers where I live because I stay in a rented single accommodation near my college which is too small since I'm very busy with my studies.

'No down' 应为 'No'。'not many flowers' 前应加 'there are' 表示存在。'rentier' 拼写错误，应为 'rented'。

× I don't have enough time to grow any flowers.

✓ I don't have enough time to grow any flowers.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× Because there is a beautiful park where a lot of flowers are group.

✓ Because there is a beautiful park where a lot of flowers are grown.

'are group' 应为被动语态 'are grown'，表示花被种植。

× It makes me feel happy to record this beautiful moment of life.

✓ It makes me feel happy to record this beautiful moment of life.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× Yes, it is very prevalent between couples and lovers.

✓ Yes, it is very prevalent among couples and lovers.

'between' 用于两者之间，'among' 用于多者之间，'couples and lovers' 超过两者，应使用 'among'。

× Boys in my country usually sends flowers too.

✓ Boys in my country usually send flowers too.

主语 'Boys' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'send'，而非 'sends'。

× The people he loved on Valentine's Day.

✓ The people he loves on Valentine's Day.

时态应与上下文一致，表达习惯动作应使用一般现在时 'loves'。

× The girl who received the flowers usually feel delighted.

✓ The girl who receives the flowers usually feels delighted.

主语 'The girl' 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'feels'，且时态应为一般现在时 'receives' 表示习惯动作。