Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I love flowers. I suppose side flower can make me. Come down and I can see lots of colorful flowers. When I see this flowers I early. Sing I'm. Bill.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
My father, he loves flowers. Very much. He is a fan of flowers in his phone. He take lots of flowers, photos.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Yeah, or, said he. I don't think they are lots of flowers as I live in urban. On the they are lots of tall buildings. On the. They are not enough place to follows flowers.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I suppose that I'm a photograph are and I think I think flowers is very beautiful. And when I work on the street, I always. A tent flowers always take attention for me.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, in our country flowers is a symbol of house and energetic. When people get injured or. Hi, we're good score we always. Send flowers to them.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和表达存在较多错误,建议练习简单句的正确表达,避免无意义的词汇和句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much. They make me feel happy and relaxed. When I see colorful flowers, my mood improves instantly.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且语法错误较多,建议使用完整句子并增加细节描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, my father loves flowers a lot. He enjoys taking photos of different kinds of flowers and often shares them with our family.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱且语法错误严重,建议练习清晰表达地点和原因,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I live in a city where there are many tall buildings, so there are not many flowers around. The limited space makes it hard to grow flowers.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不流畅且有语法错误,建议简化句子结构,明确表达自己的爱好和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photography and often take pictures of flowers because I find them very beautiful. When I walk outside, flowers always catch my attention.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,语法和词汇使用错误较多,建议学习常用表达和句型,明确说明送花的场合和意义。
Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, flowers symbolize health and energy. People often send flowers to friends or family when they are sick or to celebrate special occasions.
× I suppose side flower can make me.
✓ I suppose flowers can make me happy.
这里'side flower'应为复数形式'flowers',因为谈论的是花的种类或数量。单复数错误会导致句意不清。
× Come down and I can see lots of colorful flowers.
✓ When I come down, I can see lots of colorful flowers.
原句缺少主语和时间状语,导致句子结构不完整。需要加上时间状语'When I come down'使句子完整。
× When I see this flowers I early.
✓ When I see these flowers, I feel happy early in the morning.
'this flowers'应为'these flowers',因为flowers是复数,指示代词也应使用复数形式。
× Sing I'm. Bill.
✓ I like to sing. My name is Bill.
原句不完整且无意义,推测学生想表达喜欢唱歌和自我介绍,需补充完整句子。
× He take lots of flowers, photos.
✓ He takes lots of flower photos.
主语是第三人称单数'He',谓语动词应加-s,变为'takes'。
× I don't think they are lots of flowers as I live in urban.
✓ I don't think there are lots of flowers because I live in an urban area.
'lots of flowers'前缺少'are',且'urban'应为名词短语'an urban area'。
× On the they are lots of tall buildings.
✓ There are lots of tall buildings there.
'On the'用法错误,应改为'there'表示存在。
× On the. They are not enough place to follows flowers.
✓ There is not enough place to grow flowers.
'On the'用法错误,且'place'应为单数,'follows'应为'grow'或'plant',动词形式错误。
× I suppose that I'm a photograph are and I think I think flowers is very beautiful.
✓ I suppose that I'm a photographer and I think flowers are very beautiful.
'photograph'应为名词'photographer','flowers'为复数,谓语动词应为'are'。
× And when I work on the street, I always. A tent flowers always take attention for me.
✓ And when I work on the street, flowers always attract my attention.
原句结构混乱,需重组句子使其通顺表达意思。
× Yes, in our country flowers is a symbol of house and energetic.
✓ Yes, in our country flowers are a symbol of happiness and energy.
'flowers'为复数,谓语动词应为'are',且'house and energetic'表达不当,应为'happiness and energy'。
× When people get injured or. Hi, we're good score we always. Send flowers to them.
✓ When people get injured or have good news, we always send flowers to them.
原句断句错误,缺少谓语和连词,需补充完整表达。