Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Flowers is”应为“Flowers are”，且句子不连贯。建议注意主谓一致，避免断句，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they can brighten up people's mood. For example, I often send roses to my mother to show my love and appreciation.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“keep keeps fridge flowers”不清楚，句子断裂。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰，避免重复和断句。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers a lot. She often keeps fresh flowers in our bedroom, which helps improve our mood when we see them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“rules”应为“roses”，句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，句子连贯，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many roses and lilies on the streets where I live. Although I don't know all their names, I enjoy seeing them in the gardens.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不自然，且“my role”应为“my rose”。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of beautiful things. Just last week, I took photos of a rose and sent them to my mom.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但有重复表达“to convey, to convey love”。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays or Mother's Day to express their love and best wishes.

× Flowers is something which can make people to be happy and. Exciting.

✓ Flowers are something which can make people happy and excited.

flowers 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are；make 后面不需要 to，且 exciting 应改为形容词 excited 来描述人的感受。

× I always send rules to my mother. To risk to. Show my love for her.

✓ I always send roses to my mother to express my love for her.

send 后面应接名词 roses（玫瑰），risk to 是错误搭配，应使用 express 来表达“表达爱意”。

× She often keep keeps fridge flowers.

✓ She often keeps fresh flowers in the fridge.

第三人称单数 she，动词 keep 应加 s 变为 keeps；fridge flowers 应为 fresh flowers in the fridge，表达更准确。

× There are many rules and lilies.

✓ There are many roses and lilies.

rules 是错误单词，应为 roses（玫瑰），符合语境。

× However, because my knowledge about the flowers is limited, so I can sometimes I can name them when I encounter them in a garden.

✓ However, because my knowledge about flowers is limited, I can sometimes name them when I encounter them in a garden.

句子中存在多余的 so 和重复的 I can，需删除以使句子结构正确。

× Just last week, I. I took photos for my role, which I sent to my mom.

✓ Just last week, I took photos of my rose, which I sent to my mom.

role 应为 rose（玫瑰），且 photos 后应接介词 of；句子时态正确。

× People prefer to send flowers to others on special days. For instance, like birthdays or mother's days, people always send the traditional flowers to their relatives to convey, to convey love.

✓ People prefer to send flowers to others on special days. For instance, on birthdays or Mother's Day, people always send traditional flowers to their relatives to convey love.

like 与 for instance 重复使用，去掉 like；mother's days 应为 Mother's Day；the traditional flowers 中 the 可去掉，表达更自然。