Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Well definitely I love flowers to add beauty and college any environments but I have some allergy so I can't close to flower.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Well I definitely love flowers for ending beauty to any environment, but I have allergies so I can't be close to them.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Well, I will say yes, there are quite a few flowers while I leave, especially in public parks and my community. For example, during the spring this trees are land with colorful bloons like to leap and roses.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I would say absolutely yes. I often take many photos of flowers in daily life, especially in spring. Although I don't get very close to the flowers, I like capturing beautiful photos of den.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Actually I would say here's people often send flowers to others in my country is specially during important festival. For example month festival people always send flowers. Send a branch of flowers, a symbol of love.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议注意句子结构,避免拼写错误,并且表达更流畅自然。例如,将"college any environments"改为"decorate any environment",并且注意冠词和复数形式的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely love flowers because they add beauty and decorate any environment. However, I have allergies, so I can't get too close to them.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符,重复了上一题的内容,未直接回答是否认识喜欢花的人。建议直接回答问题,并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She often grows different kinds of flowers in our garden and takes good care of them.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写和语法错误,如"while I leave"应为"where I live","this trees are land with colorful bloons like to leap and roses"表达不清且有拼写错误。建议注意拼写和句子结构,使用恰当的词汇描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially in public parks and my community. For example, in spring, the trees are covered with colorful blooms like tulips and roses.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但最后一句"photos of den"不清楚含义,可能是拼写错误。建议注意用词准确,避免模糊表达。
Ví dụ: Absolutely yes. I often take many photos of flowers in my daily life, especially during spring. Although I don't get very close to the flowers because of my allergies, I enjoy capturing their beauty through my camera.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如"here's people"应为"people here","month festival"不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,具体说明节日和送花的习俗。
Ví dụ: Actually, people here often send flowers to others, especially during important festivals. For example, during the Mid-Autumn Festival, people send flowers as a symbol of love and good wishes.
× Well definitely I love flowers to add beauty and college any environments but I have some allergy so I can't close to flower.
✓ Well, definitely I love flowers to add beauty and color to any environment, but I have some allergies so I can't get close to flowers.
原句中 'college' 应为 'color',且 'close to flower' 应为 'get close to flowers',动词短语使用错误,且名词单复数错误。
× Well definitely I love flowers to add beauty and college any environments but I have some allergy so I can't close to flower.
✓ Well, definitely I love flowers to add beauty and color to any environment, but I have some allergies so I can't get close to flowers.
介词 'to' 用于表达目的地或方向,这里应使用 'to' 连接 'add beauty and color' 和 'any environment',且 'close to flower' 应为 'get close to flowers'。
× Well definitely I love flowers to add beauty and college any environments but I have some allergy so I can't close to flower.
✓ Well, definitely I love flowers to add beauty and color to any environment, but I have some allergies so I can't get close to flowers.
'environments' 应为单数 'environment',因为这里指的是一般环境;'allergy' 应为复数 'allergies',表示多种过敏症状;'flower' 应为复数 'flowers'。
× Well I definitely love flowers for ending beauty to any environment, but I have allergies so I can't be close to them.
✓ Well, I definitely love flowers for adding beauty to any environment, but I have allergies so I can't be close to them.
'for ending beauty' 中 'ending' 用法错误,应为 'adding',表示“增加美丽”。
× Well I definitely love flowers for ending beauty to any environment, but I have allergies so I can't be close to them.
✓ Well, I definitely love flowers for adding beauty to any environment, but I have allergies so I can't be close to them.
介词 'to' 用于连接 'adding beauty' 和 'any environment',这里使用正确,无需更改。
× Well, I will say yes, there are quite a few flowers while I leave, especially in public parks and my community.
✓ Well, I would say yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and my community.
'will say' 应改为 'would say' 表示委婉语气;'while I leave' 应为 'where I live',表达地点。
× Well, I will say yes, there are quite a few flowers while I leave, especially in public parks and my community.
✓ Well, I would say yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and my community.
'while' 用于表示时间,错误地用作地点,应使用 'where' 表示地点。
× For example, during the spring this trees are land with colorful bloons like to leap and roses.
✓ For example, during the spring these trees are lined with colorful blooms like tulips and roses.
'this trees' 应为复数 'these trees';'land' 应为 'lined';'bloons' 应为 'blooms';'to leap' 应为 'tulips'。
× For example, during the spring this trees are land with colorful bloons like to leap and roses.
✓ For example, during the spring these trees are lined with colorful blooms like tulips and roses.
'land' 应为过去分词 'lined',表示被动状态。
× For example, during the spring this trees are land with colorful bloons like to leap and roses.
✓ For example, during the spring these trees are lined with colorful blooms like tulips and roses.
'during the spring' 表示时间,使用正确,无需更改。
× I often take many photos of flowers in daily life, especially in spring.
✓ I often take many photos of flowers in daily life, especially in spring.
该句语法正确,无需更改。
× Although I don't get very close to the flowers, I like capturing beautiful photos of den.
✓ Although I don't get very close to the flowers, I like capturing beautiful photos of them.
'den' 应为 'them',指代前文的 'flowers',代词使用错误。
× Actually I would say here's people often send flowers to others in my country is specially during important festival.
✓ Actually, I would say here people often send flowers to others in my country, especially during important festivals.
'here's' 应为 'here';'specially' 应为 'especially';'festival' 应为复数 'festivals'。
× Actually I would say here's people often send flowers to others in my country is specially during important festival.
✓ Actually, I would say here people often send flowers to others in my country, especially during important festivals.
'especially' 应放在修饰的词前,位置错误。
× For example month festival people always send flowers.
✓ For example, during the Mid-Autumn Festival, people always send flowers.
'month festival' 应为具体节日名称,如 'Mid-Autumn Festival';缺少介词 'during'。
× For example month festival people always send flowers.
✓ For example, during the Mid-Autumn Festival, people always send flowers.
缺少介词 'during' 表示时间。
× Send a branch of flowers, a symbol of love.
✓ They send a branch of flowers as a symbol of love.
原句缺少主语和谓语,句子不完整。