Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I have little interest in geography, maybe becauses I. Don't do well in the subject of geography in my Junior School. And I can't understand so direction of wind or. Terry.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely it can help us understand the world better. Such as? Understand global issues like climate change and the Verity of. Mountains.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school. Bad. I didn't do well in this in this subject and I feel it confusing for me.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, just as I mentioned earlier, I. Stone, I didn't do well in this subject. An icon, understand? Well, about this subject, so I cannot impair the knowledge to other peoples.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
I think I will not learn the geography in a. Tedious. Way of such as books or. Channel spot I was. Learn it in such interesting ways such as videos.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和表达存在错误,建议简化句子结构,避免语法错误,并且用更自然的表达方式回答问题。
Ví dụ: I don't like geography very much because I found it difficult in junior school. For example, I struggled to understand concepts like wind direction.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简略且表达不清晰,建议使用完整句子并且用连接词使表达更流畅,同时提供更具体的例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand important global issues, such as climate change and the diversity of mountains around the world.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,建议使用完整句子并且清晰表达自己的感受,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in junior high and high school. However, I didn't do well because I found the subject confusing.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误,建议简化表达,直接回答问题并说明原因,避免使用不正确的词汇。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I didn't do well in this subject and I don't understand it well enough to teach others.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,建议使用连贯的句子并且清楚表达学习方式的偏好。
Ví dụ: I don't want to learn geography in a boring way like reading books or watching documentaries. Instead, I prefer to learn through interesting videos.
× I have little interest in geography, maybe becauses I. Don't do well in the subject of geography in my Junior School.
✓ I have little interest in geography, maybe because I didn't do well in the subject of geography in my Junior School.
这里的时间是过去的情况,应该用过去时态'didn't do well',而不是现在时'don't do well'。
× And I can't understand so direction of wind or. Terry.
✓ And I can't understand the direction of the wind or weather.
这里'understand so direction of wind or Terry'表达不正确,应该用'the direction of the wind or weather','so'用错,'Terry'应为'weather'。
× Such as? Understand global issues like climate change and the Verity of. Mountains.
✓ Such as understanding global issues like climate change and the variety of mountains.
'Understand'应改为动名词形式'understanding','Verity'拼写错误,应为'variety'。
× Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school. Bad. I didn't do well in this in this subject and I feel it confusing for me.
✓ Yes, I learned geography in my junior high school and high school. But I didn't do well in this subject and I felt it confusing for me.
'Bad'应改为连接词'But','feel'应使用过去时'felt',因为描述的是过去的感受。
× No, just as I mentioned earlier, I. Stone, I didn't do well in this subject. An icon, understand? Well, about this subject, so I cannot impair the knowledge to other peoples.
✓ No, just as I mentioned earlier, I am sorry, I didn't do well in this subject. And I don't understand well about this subject, so I cannot impart the knowledge to other people.
'Stone'应为'sorry','An icon'应为'And I don't','impair'用错,应为'impart','peoples'应为'people'。
× I think I will not learn the geography in a. Tedious. Way of such as books or. Channel spot I was. Learn it in such interesting ways such as videos.
✓ I think I will not learn geography in a tedious way such as books or channels. I want to learn it in interesting ways such as videos.
句子结构混乱,'Channel spot I was'无意义,改为'channels',并调整句子使其通顺。