Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I really like the geography. When I was a child I used to read a manage your algorithm books which makes me feel happy and their fantasticks Marlow are learning about different countries and cultures. Help me round my horrid and sign the open my eyes.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes that I think geography is very useful becauses it help people understand the different culture and customs around the world. For example in my daily life I ish and I enjoy rating algorithm books and social media to expose.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Oh yes, I have a London J algorithm. When I was in primary school, my teacher used the pictures and the maps to help me understand that different countries, cultures, even customs. I think it's very interesting because it helped me learn.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, I don't want to be geographer teacher come, although I really enjoy a rating some geography books. UM, it helped me a lot about any other words and the countries, but I don't like to.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Trees. Yes, uhm, I usually learn. I usually read many geography books including words geography and I learned about different countries and cultures. Uhm.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰,存在语法和词汇错误。建议简化句子结构,使用简单且准确的词汇,避免无意义的词汇堆砌。
Ví dụ: I really like geography because it helps me learn about different countries and cultures. When I was a child, I enjoyed reading books about the world, which made me happy and opened my eyes to new places.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,内容不具体。建议直接回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并举具体例子说明地理的用处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps people understand different cultures and customs. For example, I often read geography books and use social media to learn about other countries.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有不相关或错误的词汇,表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题,使用清晰的句子结构,并具体说明学习地理的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I learned geography in primary school. My teacher used pictures and maps to help us understand different countries and cultures. I found it very interesting and helpful.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议明确表达自己的意愿,并简洁说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer other subjects, even though I enjoy reading geography books.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语音填充词和重复,表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并具体说明学习地理的方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries. I often read geography books to learn about different cultures and places.
× I really like the geography.
✓ I really like geography.
在英语中,学科名称前通常不加冠词“the”,所以应去掉“the”。
× When I was a child I used to read a manage your algorithm books which makes me feel happy and their fantasticks Marlow are learning about different countries and cultures.
✓ When I was a child, I used to read many geography books which made me feel happy and fascinated to learn about different countries and cultures.
原句结构混乱,单词拼写错误且语法不通顺。应调整句子结构,使用正确的单词和时态,使句意明确。
× Help me round my horrid and sign the open my eyes.
✓ They helped me broaden my horizon and open my eyes.
原句中代词使用错误且表达不清,应使用正确的代词和短语表达“拓宽视野,开阔眼界”。
× Yes that I think geography is very useful becauses it help people understand the different culture and customs around the world.
✓ Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps people understand the different cultures and customs around the world.
“because”拼写错误;“culture”应为复数“cultures”;动词“help”需加第三人称单数形式“helps”;句中缺少逗号。
× becauses it help people understand the different culture and customs around the world.
✓ because it helps people understand the different cultures and customs around the world.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,且“culture”应为复数。
× For example in my daily life I ish and I enjoy rating algorithm books and social media to expose.
✓ For example, in my daily life, I read and enjoy reading geography books and social media to learn more.
“ish”拼写错误,应为“read”;“rating algorithm books”不合适,应为“reading geography books”;“to expose”用法错误,应为“to learn more”。
× Oh yes, I have a London J algorithm.
✓ Oh yes, I have learned geography.
原句无意义且拼写错误,应改为正确表达“我学过地理”。
× When I was in primary school, my teacher used the pictures and the maps to help me understand that different countries, cultures, even customs.
✓ When I was in primary school, my teacher used pictures and maps to help me understand different countries, cultures, and even customs.
“used the pictures and the maps”中冠词多余,应去掉;“that”多余,应去掉;连接词应为“and”。
× No, I don't want to be geographer teacher come, although I really enjoy a rating some geography books.
✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher, although I really enjoy reading some geography books.
“geographer teacher come”拼写错误且语序错误,应为“a geography teacher”;“a rating”应为“reading”。
× UM, it helped me a lot about any other words and the countries, but I don't like to.
✓ Um, it helped me a lot about many other words and countries, but I don't like to.
“any other words”应为“many other words”;“the countries”前冠词多余,应去掉。
× Trees. Yes, uhm, I usually learn.
✓ Yes, uhm, I usually learn.
“Trees”应为“Yes”,原词拼写错误。
× I usually read many geography books including words geography and I learned about different countries and cultures.
✓ I usually read many geography books and learn about different countries and cultures.
时态不一致,“learned”应改为现在时“learn”,与“usually”搭配。