Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing phrases like 'Shocker Free'. Try to be more direct and clear, avoiding unnecessary or incorrect words. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent by linking your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I have a neutral attitude towards geography. I enjoy learning about countries and tourist spots, but I don't find it as exciting as other subjects. However, I like it when it relates to travel and learning about new cultures.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like 'travel fee' and 'geographical code'. Try to use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Also, provide specific examples and link your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand different countries and how to navigate them. For example, knowing the location of places can make traveling easier and safer.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to give a brief explanation in a simple way.

Ví dụ: I haven't studied geography deeply, but I know it is the study of the relationship between humans and the environment, and how natural elements interact with each other.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good. To improve, you can add a linking word and a bit more detail to make your response more natural and complete.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer to do something that interests me more, like health and sciences.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but is a bit fragmented and unclear at the end. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries, especially about their tourism and culture. I am also interested in how we can promote sustainability and protect the environment.

× I have a neutral attitude towards Shocker Free.

✓ I have a neutral attitude towards geography.

The phrase 'Shocker Free' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The student likely meant 'geography', which is the subject being discussed. Using the correct noun is essential for clarity.

× However, I love it when in terms of travel and learning new cultures.

✓ However, I love it when it comes to travel and learning new cultures.

The phrase 'when in terms of' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'when it comes to', which is used to introduce a specific aspect or topic.

× Yes, I do believe that travel fee is useful trust, for example navigating in two different countries.

✓ Yes, I do believe that travel is useful, for example navigating in two different countries.

The phrase 'travel fee is useful trust' is incorrect and confusing. The intended meaning is likely that 'travel' is useful. Removing 'fee' and 'trust' clarifies the sentence.

× By knowing their geographical code, sure you will see how fast at this country and how important it is.

✓ By knowing their geographical location, you will see how vast this country is and how important it is.

The phrase 'geographical code' is incorrect; 'geographical location' is appropriate. Also, 'how fast at this country' is incorrect; 'how vast this country is' fits better. The sentence needed correction for proper preposition and word choice.

× Into the world.

✓ It helps us understand the world.

'Into the world' is a sentence fragment without a verb or subject. It needs to be connected to a complete sentence to convey meaning.

× I don't really have a deep understanding with regards to geography.

✓ I don't really have a deep understanding of geography.

The phrase 'understanding with regards to' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'understanding of' when referring to knowledge about a subject.

× All I know is that this is a study of relation between environment and human, of how the natural complexities involved with each other.

✓ All I know is that it is the study of the relationship between the environment and humans, and how the natural complexities interact with each other.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and missing articles. 'Relation' should be 'relationship', and 'human' should be plural 'humans'. Also, 'involved with each other' should be 'interact with each other' for clarity.

× I would rather prefer to do something that sparks my interests, like health and sciences.

✓ I would prefer to do something that sparks my interest, like health and science.

'Rather prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone suffices. 'Interests' should be singular 'interest' when referring to general liking. 'Sciences' is better as singular 'science' when paired with 'health'.

× I think I would love to learn more about geography in other countries in terms of tourism and culture.

✓ I think I would love to learn more about the geography of other countries in terms of tourism and culture.

The phrase 'geography in other countries' is less natural than 'geography of other countries'. The preposition 'of' is correct to indicate possession or relation.

× Not really about the landscapes and natural resources but more on. How we can do sustainability and environmental?

✓ Not really about the landscapes and natural resources, but more about how we can achieve sustainability and protect the environment.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'More on. How we can do sustainability and environmental?' is incomplete and awkward. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, complete sentence.