Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且更直接地回答问题。

Ví dụ: I am not very interested in geography, but I enjoy watching documentaries about outer space because I find them fascinating.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think geography is very useful, especially when traveling. For example, if a place is dry, we need to prepare accordingly, and if it is humid, bringing a coat is necessary.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的地方，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且避免不必要的细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned geography in primary and middle school. It was a compulsory subject, so I gained a lot of knowledge. However, after graduation, I didn't focus much on it.

Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续且表达不流畅，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I find geography quite complicated and I am not very interested in it, so I don't plan to become a geography teacher.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to learn about the geography of other countries because I love traveling. This knowledge helps me prepare better and broadens my understanding.

× Well, to be honest I I'm not very into geography, but sometimes I will choose to watch some documentaries about outer space I think, which is a really intriguing.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not very into geography, but sometimes I choose to watch some documentaries about outer space, which I think is really intriguing.

这里“choose to watch”不需要使用将来时“will choose”，因为描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时。此外，“which is a really intriguing”中“intriguing”是形容词，前面缺少主语“which I think is really intriguing”更完整。

× Well, to be honest I I'm not very into geography, but sometimes I will choose to watch some documentaries about outer space I think, which is a really intriguing.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not very into geography, but sometimes I choose to watch some documentaries about outer space, which I think is really intriguing.

“a really intriguing”中“intriguing”是形容词，前面用不定冠词“a”不合适，应该用“really intriguing”作为形容词短语修饰。

× I think geography is a very useful especially when we take a trip to some places.

✓ I think geography is very useful, especially when we take a trip to some places.

“a very useful”中“useful”是形容词，前面不需要冠词“a”，应直接用“very useful”。

× If that is a dry place then we have to prepare for not being some bad and if it is a humid then bring a coat is so necessary.

✓ If it is a dry place, then we have to prepare for bad weather, and if it is humid, then bringing a coat is necessary.

“prepare for not being some bad”表达不清，应改为“prepare for bad weather”。“a humid”缺少名词，应为“if it is humid”。“bring a coat is so necessary”应改为动名词短语“bringing a coat is necessary”。

× Yes, when I was in a primary school. At middle school, geography is a compulsory class for us, so I gained much knowledge about 8:00.

✓ Yes, when I was in primary school. In middle school, geography was a compulsory class for us, so I gained much knowledge about it.

“At middle school”应改为“In middle school”。“geography is”应使用过去时“was”，因为描述的是过去的情况。句尾“about 8:00”不合适，应为“about it”。

× However, when I graduate, I didn't take much attention in learning it.

✓ However, after I graduated, I didn't pay much attention to learning it.

“when I graduate”时态错误，应为过去时“after I graduated”。“take much attention”表达错误，应为“pay much attention to”。

× Uhm, to be honest, to know, 'cause I think learning more about the geography is very complicated and.

✓ Uhm, to be honest, I don't know, because I think learning more about geography is very complicated.

“to know”缺少主语，应为“I don't know”。“the geography”中“geography”作为学科名词通常不加冠词。

× Uhm, to be honest, to know, 'cause I think learning more about the geography is very complicated and.

✓ Uhm, to be honest, I don't know, because I think learning more about geography is very complicated.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，连接词使用不当，应去掉。

× Still, I'm not very interested in this subject, therefore I won't consider being a geography teacher in the future.

✓ Still, I'm not very interested in this subject; therefore, I won't consider being a geography teacher in the future.

“therefore”前应使用分号或句号分隔两个独立句子，且“therefore”后应加逗号。

× Yes, I think that it is very necessary for me to know about the geography of other counties 'cause I really love to travel around.

✓ Yes, I think that it is very necessary for me to know about the geography of other countries because I really love to travel around.

“counties”应为“countries”，拼写错误。口语中“'cause”应改为正式“because”。

× So knowing about the geography, about there are countries can help me not only to enlarge my scope of knowledge but also helped me to get much.

✓ So knowing about the geography of other countries can help me not only to enlarge my scope of knowledge but also help me to prepare better.

“about there are countries”表达错误，应为“about the geography of other countries”。“helped me to get much”不完整，应改为“help me to prepare better”。

× Better preparation for before going to this countries.

✓ Better preparation before going to these countries.

“for before”重复且不合适，应去掉“for”。“this countries”应为复数“these countries”。