Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I really like it. I think I speak 'cause of my father, 'cause when I was young my father always played a game with me in geography. The game was to say the country name. Yeah. So I must know a lot of countries to play the game with him.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course is useful. If I know the draw graffiti well. I can know the word well, such as I know where's the Europe is worth Australia is an I have a. Sculpture of the Earth.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's over compulsory class in our secondary school. So I learned a drug, a fee for three years, they remind secondary school time. And. We learn the simple. Are the basic things about it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Well, I can say not really, because I still have a lot of things to learn. I don't think I'm quite suitable for that job. Yeah, I'm just a. Trgovina lover, yeah, not teacher.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will. Well I have a travel planning to another country. I will do a lot of search says suggest to draw goofy. About the staff to know clearly about their country.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够自然,有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更准确的词汇表达。
Ví dụ: I really like geography because my father used to play a game with me when I was young. We would name different countries, so I learned many country names through this game.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,表达不清楚,词汇使用错误。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点,并举具体例子说明地理知识的用处。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography is useful because it helps me understand where countries like Europe and Australia are located on the map.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误,表达不连贯。建议用完整句子说明学习经历,并具体描述所学内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography was a compulsory subject in my secondary school. I studied it for three years and learned the basic concepts about the earth and countries.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,有语法错误。建议用更自然的表达方式说明自己的想法,并避免口语化的断句。
Ví dụ: Not really. I still have a lot to learn, so I don't think I am suitable to be a geography teacher. I just enjoy learning about geography.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明计划,并具体描述如何学习其他国家的地理知识。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will. I am planning to travel to another country, so I will research a lot about its geography to understand the country better.
× Yes, of course is useful.
✓ Yes, of course it is useful.
句子缺少主语“it”,在英语中,第三人称单数句子必须有明确的主语。这里应加上“it”来指代前文提到的“geography”。
× If I know the draw graffiti well.
✓ If I know the geography well.
“draw graffiti”是错误的词组,正确的词是“geography”,表示地理学。这里是词汇错误,属于介词使用错误范畴。
× I can know the word well, such as I know where's the Europe is worth Australia is an I have a. Sculpture of the Earth.
✓ I can know the world well, such as I know where Europe and Australia are, and I have a sculpture of the Earth.
原句中“word”应为“world”,且句子结构混乱,缺少连词和正确的代词使用。需要调整句子结构,使其表达清晰。
× Yes, it's over compulsory class in our secondary school.
✓ Yes, it's a compulsory class in our secondary school.
“over”用法错误,应为“a compulsory class”,表示“必修课”。这里是词汇使用错误,属于语法问题。
× So I learned a drug, a fee for three years, they remind secondary school time.
✓ So I learned geography for three years during secondary school time.
“a drug, a fee”是错误的词组,应为“geography”,且“they remind”用法错误,应改为“during”。这里是介词使用错误。
× And. We learn the simple. Are the basic things about it.
✓ And we learn the simple, basic things about it.
句子断裂且结构不完整,应合并为一句完整句子,去掉多余的句号,使表达连贯。
× Well, I can say not really, because I still have a lot of things to learn.
✓ Well, I can say not really, because I still have a lot to learn.
“a lot of things”可以简化为“a lot”,使表达更自然。
× I don't think I'm quite suitable for that job.
✓ I don't think I'm quite suitable for that job.
该句语法正确,无需修改。
× Yeah, I'm just a. Trgovina lover, yeah, not teacher.
✓ Yeah, I'm just a geography lover, yeah, not a teacher.
“Trgovina”是错误拼写,应为“geography”,且“not teacher”前应加冠词“a”。
× Well I have a travel planning to another country.
✓ Well, I have travel plans to another country.
“a travel planning”用法错误,应为“travel plans”,表示“旅行计划”。
× I will do a lot of search says suggest to draw goofy.
✓ I will do a lot of research to learn about geography.
“search says suggest to draw goofy”完全错误,应改为“do a lot of research to learn about geography”,表达清晰且语法正确。
× About the staff to know clearly about their country.
✓ About the stuff to know clearly about their country.
“staff”应为“stuff”,表示“东西、资料”,且句子结构需调整以表达清楚。