Part 1
Giám khảo
Does your name have any special meaning?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, my name has a special meaning. My name is AWOL and the special mini uh, that I can say is that the meaning of a wall is the first so which I it's aligned in our religion. I aware you are the Arabic.
Giám khảo
How would you choose names for your next generation?
Thí sinh
It is very easy for me to choose name for my next generation because uh in according to my own religion we have some protocol which we are using to derive one's name. So especially new name for new baby.
Giám khảo
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, I could remember that my great grandfather has the name that I'm bearing. So I think that is the major reason why they name me than that name. So, so I could be bearing the name with the great grandfather.
Giám khảo
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
Thí sinh
No, there is no any differences between how Chinese are naming their children, uh, in the holidays with the uh, with the way they are naming their children nowadays. So for example, you, you can see it in the lot of movies, their movies.
Giám khảo
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
Thí sinh
No, I cannot say about more about China 'cause I'm not a citizen of China, but it will be very pretty if someone can know about how more popular they are names.
Does your name have any special meaning?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: My brother, your answer dey confuse small and e no too clear. Try make your answer dey natural and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the meaning of your name well well without repeating or using filler words like 'uh'. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to use correct vocabulary and grammar to make your meaning clear.
Ví dụ: Yes, my name is AWOL, and it has a special meaning in my religion. It means 'the first born,' which is very important to my family. This name reflects our cultural values and beliefs.
How would you choose names for your next generation?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: My guy, your answer dey okay but e fit better if you talk more clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the naming protocol in your religion with specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas and make your answer more logical and natural.
Ví dụ: I will choose names for my children based on the traditions of my religion because we have specific protocols to follow. For example, we select names that reflect our family's history and values, which helps preserve our culture.
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: My brother, your answer dey understandable but you fit improve by making your sentences clearer and avoiding repetition. Start with a direct answer, then explain the reason with specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, my great grandfather had the same name as me. Because of this, my parents decided to name me after him to honor our family heritage.
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: My guy, your answer no too clear and e get some grammar wahala. Try to answer directly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, explain your point with clear examples and use linking words to make your answer logical. Avoid vague statements and be specific about the differences or similarities.
Ví dụ: I think there are no big differences between how Chinese people name their children now and in the past. For example, traditional names are still popular, and you can see this in many Chinese movies that show family life.
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: My brother, your answer no too natural and e no answer the question well. Even if you no sabi well, try to give a general opinion or guess with reasons. Use clear sentences and avoid repeating words. This go make your answer more effective and natural.
Ví dụ: I am not very sure about popular names in China because I am not a citizen. However, I believe that some traditional names remain popular due to cultural significance and family traditions.
× My name is AWOL and the special mini uh, that I can say is that the meaning of a wall is the first so which I it's aligned in our religion.
✓ My name is AWOL and the special meaning, uh, that I can say is that the meaning of AWOL is the first soul which is aligned with our religion.
The original sentence misused prepositions and had unclear phrasing. 'Aligned in our religion' should be 'aligned with our religion' to correctly express association. Also, 'meaning of a wall' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'meaning of AWOL'. Clearer phrasing improves understanding.
× It is very easy for me to choose name for my next generation because uh in according to my own religion we have some protocol which we are using to derive one's name.
✓ It is very easy for me to choose a name for my next generation because, according to my own religion, we have some protocols which we use to derive one's name.
The phrase 'in according to' is incorrect; it should be simply 'according to'. Also, 'choose name' needs an article 'a' before 'name'. 'Protocol' should be plural 'protocols' to match 'some'. These corrections fix preposition and article usage.
× It is very easy for me to choose name for my next generation because uh in according to my own religion we have some protocol which we are using to derive one's name.
✓ It is very easy for me to choose a name for my next generation because, according to my own religion, we have some protocols which we use to derive one's name.
The word 'protocol' should be plural 'protocols' because it is preceded by 'some', which indicates more than one. Also, 'choose name' needs the article 'a' before 'name' to be grammatically correct.
× Yes, yes, I could remember that my great grandfather has the name that I'm bearing.
✓ Yes, yes, I remember that my great-grandfather had the name that I bear.
'Great grandfather' should be hyphenated as 'great-grandfather'. Also, 'has' should be 'had' to reflect past tense. 'I'm bearing' is awkward; 'I bear' is better for present tense. The sentence mixes tenses and plural forms incorrectly.
× Yes, yes, I could remember that my great grandfather has the name that I'm bearing.
✓ Yes, yes, I remember that my great-grandfather had the name that I bear.
The phrase 'could remember' is past tense but the context suggests present memory, so 'remember' is better. 'Has' should be 'had' to indicate past possession. Consistent tense usage is important.
× So I think that is the major reason why they name me than that name.
✓ So I think that is the major reason why they named me with that name.
The phrase 'name me than that name' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate the name given. Also, 'name' should be past tense 'named' to match the context.
× So, so I could be bearing the name with the great grandfather.
✓ So, so I could be bearing the name of the great-grandfather.
The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'of' is used to indicate possession or association with the great-grandfather. Also, 'great grandfather' should be hyphenated.
× No, there is no any differences between how Chinese are naming their children, uh, in the holidays with the uh, with the way they are naming their children nowadays.
✓ No, there are no differences between how Chinese name their children during holidays and how they name their children nowadays.
'No any differences' is incorrect; 'no differences' suffices. 'In the holidays with the way' is awkward; better to say 'during holidays and how'. Also, 'Chinese are naming' is better as 'Chinese name' for general statements.
× No, there is no any differences between how Chinese are naming their children, uh, in the holidays with the uh, with the way they are naming their children nowadays.
✓ No, there are no differences between how Chinese name their children during holidays and how they name their children nowadays.
'Differences' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'no any' is redundant; 'no' alone is correct.
× No, I cannot say about more about China 'cause I'm not a citizen of China, but it will be very pretty if someone can know about how more popular they are names.
✓ No, I cannot say much about China because I'm not a citizen of China, but it would be nice if someone could know which names are more popular.
'Say about more about China' is incorrect; 'say much about China' is better. 'It will be very pretty' is awkward; 'it would be nice' is more natural. 'Know about how more popular they are names' is incorrect; better phrased as 'know which names are more popular'.