Names— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and slightly redundant. Try to start directly with the meaning of your name, then explain who gave it to you and why it is special. Avoid phrases like "I'm not exceptional" which confuse the meaning. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: My name means "love towards flowers," and it was given to me by my grandfather. Because of this, it holds a very special place in my heart.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. Try to use more natural phrases like "I would choose names based on current trends because many people use apps to find meaningful names."

Ví dụ: I would choose names based on current trends because many people now use apps to find names with special meanings. For example, I would use these tools to pick a meaningful and popular name for my children.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Start with a clear direct answer, then provide supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundant phrases. For example, say "No, no one in my family has the same name as me. However, one of my friends shares my name, which is uncommon in India."

Ví dụ: No, no one in my family has the same name as me. However, one of my friends has the same name, which is quite uncommon in India.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like "uh" and repeat "definitely". Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect ideas. Also, be more specific about the differences.

Ví dụ: There are many differences now compared to the past because technology has advanced. For example, people now use apps and social media to find unique names with special meanings and historical significance.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains inaccuracies and unclear examples. Lizzo and Williams are not typical Chinese names. Try to provide accurate and relevant examples. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar. For example, say "Yes, some names like Wei and Li are very popular in China because many people have these family names."

Ví dụ: Yes, some names like Wei and Li are very popular in China because they are common family names. I learned this from my classmates during college.

× I believe I would choose name for my next posterity according to the trend.

✓ I believe I would choose names for my next posterity according to the trend.

The word 'name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to choosing more than one name for the next generation. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about multiple individuals.

× If something is trendy then I will definitely try that name.

✓ If something is trendy, then I will definitely choose that name.

The verb 'try' is not appropriate when referring to selecting a name. The correct verb is 'choose' to indicate the act of selecting a name. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× For example, nowadays people try to use the different app to search the name that has a special meaning.

✓ For example, nowadays people try to use different apps to search for names that have special meanings.

The phrase 'the different app' is incorrect; it should be 'different apps' to indicate multiple applications. Also, 'search the name' should be 'search for names' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× No, I don't think so. I have somebody has the same name according to me, so one of my friend her name is same like me, so it's not.

✓ No, I don't think so. I don't know anybody who has the same name as me; one of my friends has a name similar to mine, but it's not the same.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward structure. 'I have somebody has' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't know anybody who has'. Also, 'one of my friend her name is same like me' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my friends has a name similar to mine'.

× one of my friend her name is same like me

✓ one of my friends has a name similar to mine

The phrase 'one of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'friends' is plural when using 'one of'. Also, 'her name is same like me' is incorrect; it should be 'has a name similar to mine'.

× Definitely there is a lot of difference now rather than in the past because uh, now tech technology is increasing day by day.

✓ Definitely, there are a lot of differences now compared to the past because technology is advancing day by day.

'There is a lot of difference' should be 'there are a lot of differences' because 'differences' is countable and plural. Also, 'tech technology' is redundant; 'technology' alone is sufficient.

× So people try to find a unique name which has a special meaning and history.

✓ So people try to find a unique name that has a special meaning and history.

The relative pronoun 'which' is less appropriate here; 'that' is preferred in restrictive clauses. Also, the sentence is acceptable but 'that' improves clarity.

× So definitely now people try to search the name on different apps and social media platform.

✓ So definitely now people try to search for names on different apps and social media platforms.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by the object. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names' because multiple names are searched. 'Platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match 'apps'.

× According to me, there are some names which are very popular in China, for example Lizzo and Williams.

✓ According to me, there are some names which are very popular in China, for example, Li and Wang.

The names 'Lizzo' and 'Williams' are not typical Chinese names. Assuming the student meant common Chinese names, 'Li' and 'Wang' are appropriate examples. Also, a comma is needed after 'for example'.

× So I only know about this because I was having classmates in my college so.

✓ I only know about this because I had classmates in my college.

The phrase 'I was having classmates' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I had classmates'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which is unnecessary and should be removed.