Part 1
Giám khảo
Does your name have any special meaning?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, my name is Sida and it has many special definitions such as it means success, luck, dreams, happiness and such kind of positive definitions and it is significant to me because it was given by my parents.
Giám khảo
How would you choose names for your next generation?
Thí sinh
Well, I'll probably go for names that are meaningful and timeless and the UM. And it's important that the names sounds pleasant and easy to spell and my generation should be proud of their name.
Giám khảo
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
Thí sinh
No, because my name is unique for me and it was it is uncommon in our country so it my name is only.
Giám khảo
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
Thí sinh
Well, there are some difference between now and past when choosing their name. Before the older people opted the name for the baby and then today parents can choose the name for their own baby.
Giám khảo
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
Thí sinh
Well yes Durham, many names in my country more popular than others and they are I see the shark nose and see more and they these names are more common in my country.
Does your name have any special meaning?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит много информации, но он слишком длинный и немного повторяется. Постарайтесь сделать ответ более кратким и структурированным, используя связующие слова для логичности.
Ví dụ: My name is Sida, which means success and happiness. It is very special to me because my parents chose it with these positive meanings in mind.
How would you choose names for your next generation?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ваш ответ немного нечеткий и содержит лишние слова. Старайтесь говорить более ясно и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.
Ví dụ: I would choose names that are meaningful and timeless because I want my children to be proud of their names. Also, the names should sound pleasant and be easy to spell.
Does anyone in your family have the same name as you?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Попробуйте использовать более простые и правильные предложения, чтобы сделать ответ понятным.
Ví dụ: No, no one in my family has the same name because my name is unique and uncommon in my country.
Are there any differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и грамматику. Используйте связующие слова и правильные формы глаголов.
Ví dụ: There are some differences between the past and now. In the past, older people chose the baby's name, but today, parents usually choose names themselves.
Are there any names that are more popular than others in China?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Постарайтесь говорить более четко, использовать правильные слова и избегать лишних звуков.
Ví dụ: Yes, some names are more popular in my country, such as Li, Wang, and Zhang. These names are very common among Chinese people.
× it means success, luck, dreams, happiness and such kind of positive definitions
✓ it means success, luck, dreams, happiness and such kinds of positive definitions
The phrase 'such kind of' is incorrect when referring to multiple items; it should be 'such kinds of' to agree in number with 'definitions'.
× the names sounds pleasant and easy to spell
✓ the names sound pleasant and easy to spell
The subject 'names' is plural, so the verb should be 'sound' instead of 'sounds' to agree in number.
× my generation should be proud of their name
✓ my generation should be proud of their names
The pronoun 'their' is plural, so the noun 'name' should be plural 'names' to maintain agreement.
× No, because my name is unique for me and it was it is uncommon in our country so it my name is only.
✓ No, because my name is unique to me and it is uncommon in our country, so my name is the only one.
The sentence has structural issues and redundancy. 'Unique for me' should be 'unique to me'. The phrase 'it was it is' is redundant and should be simplified. The ending 'so it my name is only' is incomplete and needs clarification.
× there are some difference between now and past when choosing their name
✓ there are some differences between now and the past when choosing their names
'Difference' should be plural 'differences' to match 'some'. 'Past' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Name' should be plural 'names' to agree with 'their'.
× Before the older people opted the name for the baby
✓ Before, the older people chose the name for the baby
The verb 'opted' is incorrectly used; 'choose' or 'chose' is appropriate here. Also, a comma after 'Before' improves clarity.
× many names in my country more popular than others and they are I see the shark nose and see more and they these names are more common in my country
✓ Many names in my country are more popular than others, such as 'I see', 'the shark nose', and 'see more'; these names are more common in my country.
The original sentence lacks verbs and proper structure. 'More popular' needs 'are' to form the verb phrase. The list of names needs to be clearly separated and introduced with 'such as'. The phrase 'they these names' is redundant and corrected to 'these names'.