Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
In fact, I dislike do parcels and didn't do it when I was a child. I think it's difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them, so I'm willing to do it.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
No, it is difficult and boring for me. I can't sewing them. When I feel bored I prefer to watch movies.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
All of them are difficult for meat. Number parcel can be too challenging for meat and I get stuck when trying to solve that.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's good for them. Parcels can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly. For example, solving puzzles regularly. It can keep their minds active.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如'dislike do parcels'应为'dislike doing puzzles',且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的动名词形式,避免拼写错误,并且回答应更简洁直接。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't do puzzles when I was a child because I found them difficult and wasn't interested in solving them.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误,如'can't sewing'应为'can't solve them'。表达不够连贯,缺少连接词。建议使用正确的动词形式,并用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't usually do puzzles because I find them difficult and boring. Instead, when I feel bored, I prefer to watch movies.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中多处拼写错误,如'meat'应为'me','parcel'应为'puzzle'。句子结构不完整,表达不清晰。建议注意拼写,使用完整句子,并具体说明哪种拼图更难。
Ví dụ: I find both word and number puzzles difficult, but number puzzles are more challenging for me because I often get stuck while solving them.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在拼写错误,如'parcels'应为'puzzles'。句子之间缺少连接词,导致表达不够连贯。建议注意拼写并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think puzzles are good for old people because they can improve memory and cognitive skills. For example, solving puzzles regularly helps keep their minds active.
× In fact, I dislike do parcels and didn't do it when I was a child.
✓ In fact, I dislike doing puzzles and didn't do them when I was a child.
动词dislike后应接动名词doing,而不是动词原形do。此外,parcels应为puzzles,且代词it应改为them以指代复数名词puzzles。
× I think it's difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them, so I'm willing to do it.
✓ I thought it was difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them, so I wasn't willing to do it.
句子描述过去的情况,时态应统一为过去时。原句中think和am willing使用了现在时,需改为过去时thought和wasn't willing。
× No, it is difficult and boring for me. I can't sewing them.
✓ No, it is difficult and boring for me. I can't sew them.
动词后不能直接接动名词sewing,情态动词can't后应接动词原形sew。
× All of them are difficult for meat.
✓ All of them are difficult for me.
meat是肉的意思,误用为me。应使用正确的代词me。
× Number parcel can be too challenging for meat and I get stuck when trying to solve that.
✓ Number puzzles can be too challenging for me and I get stuck when trying to solve them.
parcel应为puzzle,meat应为me,且代词that应改为them以指代复数名词puzzles。
× Yes, I think it's good for them. Parcels can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
✓ Yes, I think it's good for them. Puzzles can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
parcels应为puzzles,parcels是包裹的意思,语境不符。