Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer details about your preferences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child, especially Sudoku, which appeared daily in my local newspaper. I used to solve it after school every day because I found it challenging and fun. Although there were other types of puzzles, I preferred Sudoku over them.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and organizing your answer logically. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the games you play and why.

Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored. For instance, I have several puzzle games on my phone, such as Sudoku and a color-matching game, which I find interesting. Playing these games helps me pass the time and keeps my mind active.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference and reasons more clearly. Avoid grammatical errors and use linking words to explain why number puzzles are easier for you.

Ví dụ: I prefer number puzzles over word puzzles because English is not my first language, and I find word puzzles challenging. Even in my native language, I don't enjoy word puzzles much. On the other hand, I am good with numbers and enjoy puzzles like Sudoku or color-matching games.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Provide more specific reasons why puzzles are beneficial for older people, and use linking words to organize your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they provide mental stimulation without requiring much physical effort. Doing puzzles helps keep their minds active and can be a relaxing way to pass the time.

× Yes, I did do the puzzles when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did the puzzles when I was a child.

The phrase 'did do' is redundant; 'did' already indicates past tense, so 'do' should be in base form or omitted. The correct form is 'did the puzzles' or simply 'did puzzles'.

× So in my local newspaper there is every day there is a puzzle called Sudoku.

✓ So in my local newspaper, every day there is a puzzle called Sudoku.

The original sentence has redundant 'there is' twice. The correct structure is to have one 'there is' to indicate existence, followed by the subject. Also, a comma after 'newspaper' improves clarity.

× And there are some other award puzzles but I usually don't prefer I don't like those.

✓ And there are some other word puzzles, but I usually don't prefer them; I don't like those.

The word 'award' is likely a typo for 'word'. Also, 'prefer' is usually followed by an object, so 'prefer them' is correct. The sentence is split for clarity.

× So even in my currently even in my phone I have couple of puzzle games like Sudoku and there is another new one I forgot the name but it is also interesting one.

✓ So currently, even on my phone, I have a couple of puzzle games like Sudoku, and there is another new one whose name I forgot, but it is also an interesting one.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to something on a phone; 'on' is correct. Also, 'a couple of' requires an article 'a'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× And also there is another game in my phone which is matching the colors.

✓ Also, there is another game on my phone which involves matching colors.

Again, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The phrase is adjusted for natural English usage.

× So whenever I feel bored I spend time in doing those puzzles.

✓ So whenever I feel bored, I spend time doing those puzzles.

The phrase 'spend time in doing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'spend time doing'. Also, a comma after the introductory clause improves readability.

× Maybe that's because English is not my first language, even in my actual my native language I don't like doing those.

✓ Maybe that's because English is not my first language; even in my actual native language, I don't like doing those.

The phrase 'my actual my native language' is redundant; 'my actual native language' or simply 'my native language' is correct. A semicolon separates two related independent clauses.

× Always prefer doing the either numbers puzzle are some kind of color matching like that and I'm very good with numbers.

✓ I always prefer doing either number puzzles or some kind of color matching like that, and I'm very good with numbers.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'I' is needed. 'Numbers puzzle' should be pluralized to 'number puzzles'. 'Are' is incorrect here; 'or' is the correct conjunction. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yeah, I think it's very good for the world people to do puzzles, just a just a way to kill the time for them and I and it won't take much effort.

✓ Yeah, I think it's very good for older people to do puzzles; it's just a way to pass the time for them, and it doesn't take much effort.

'World people' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'older people'. 'Kill the time' is a nonstandard expression; 'pass the time' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× They can just sit there, relax and do the puzzles is kind of some mental work for them and that's I think that's really good for them.

✓ They can just sit there, relax, and do puzzles, which is a kind of mental work for them, and I think that's really good for them.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and relative pronouns. Adding commas and 'which' clarifies the sentence structure.