Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often did. Ps in my childhood. I even had a puzzle book from my mother.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
Ya. I often do puzzles when I feel bored. When I was a child. I have many spare time and I spend this time doing puzzles. But she makes me happy.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Oh, I prefer wood puzzles because I find them fascinating and interesting. They also help me learn more about strange words. Member parcels are too difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
It's think good for old people to do puzzles. It's good for their brain health and help them stay focused.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误,建议回答时注意句子完整性和语法正确,避免使用缩写或不完整的词语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often did puzzles in my childhood. My mother even gave me a puzzle book which I enjoyed very much.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议使用完整句子并且逻辑连贯,避免断句和不明确的代词。
Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored. When I was a child, I had a lot of free time, so I spent it doing puzzles because they made me happy.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误(如wood puzzles应为word puzzles),且表达不清晰,建议注意词汇准确性和句子表达的清晰度。
Ví dụ: I prefer word puzzles because I find them fascinating and interesting. They help me learn new and unusual words. Number puzzles are more difficult for me.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,建议注意主谓一致和句子结构完整,同时可以增加细节使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I think it is good for old people to do puzzles because it helps maintain their brain health and improves their concentration.
× Yes, I often did. Ps in my childhood.
✓ Yes, I often did puzzles in my childhood.
句子中缺少了名词“puzzles”,导致句子不完整。需要补充完整名词以表达完整意思。
× Ya. I often do puzzles when I feel bored.
✓ Yes, I often do puzzles when I feel bored.
“Ya”是口语缩写,正式表达应为“Yes”。
× I have many spare time and I spend this time doing puzzles.
✓ I have a lot of spare time and I spend this time doing puzzles.
“time”是不可数名词,不能用“many”修饰,应使用“a lot of”或“much”。
× But she makes me happy.
✓ But it makes me happy.
此处指代“puzzles”,应使用“it”而非“she”,且句子结构需保持主谓一致。
× Oh, I prefer wood puzzles because I find them fascinating and interesting.
✓ Oh, I prefer word puzzles because I find them fascinating and interesting.
“wood”是“木头”的意思,正确应为“word”(文字)拼图。
× Member parcels are too difficult for me.
✓ Number puzzles are too difficult for me.
“Member parcels”是错误表达,正确应为“number puzzles”(数字拼图)。
× It's think good for old people to do puzzles.
✓ I think it's good for old people to do puzzles.
句子缺少主语“I”,且“think”应作为动词使用,需调整句子结构。
× It's good for their brain health and help them stay focused.
✓ It's good for their brain health and helps them stay focused.
主语是“It”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”,保持主谓一致。