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Part 1

Giám khảo

Where is your hometown?

Thí sinh

My hometown is in Vietnam.

Giám khảo

What do you like about your home town?

Thí sinh

I like my hometown because it have a lot of Vietnamese people and it has a big sense of community.

Giám khảo

How long have you lived there?

Thí sinh

I have lived there for 10s year.

Giám khảo

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Thí sinh

Yes, because it have many good things there.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Where is your hometown?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng thiếu cụ thể và cấu trúc phong phú. Nên nêu thêm chi tiết cụ thể (tên thành phố/vùng, vị trí) và nối ý bằng câu bổ trợ để tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Hanoi, which is in the northern part of Vietnam. It's a vibrant city known for its lakes and old quarter, so I always feel surrounded by history and culture.

What do you like about your home town?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Ngữ pháp có lỗi (động từ chia sai) và nội dung chung chung. Nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể giải thích cảm giác cộng đồng.

Ví dụ: I like my hometown because it has a strong sense of community. For example, neighbors often organize festivals and help each other during Tet, which makes the place feel friendly and welcoming.

How long have you lived there?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Câu không chính xác về mặt ngữ pháp và số liệu. Dùng thì hoàn chỉnh và nói đúng số năm (ten years). Có thể mở rộng thêm bằng câu phụ về cảm nhận thời gian sống ở đó.

Ví dụ: I have lived there for ten years. During that time I’ve seen the neighborhood change a lot, which has given me a strong attachment to the place.

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu quá ngắn, chung chung và có lỗi ngữ pháp (have → has). Nên nêu lí do cụ thể cho câu trả lời và dùng liên từ/chi tiết hỗ trợ để thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it's a good place for young people because there are many job opportunities and affordable entertainment options. For instance, there are several co-working spaces and affordable cafes where young people can meet and work.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I like my hometown because it have a lot of Vietnamese people and it has a big sense of community.

I like my hometown because it has a lot of Vietnamese people and a strong sense of community.

The verb 'have' is incorrect for the singular subject 'it'; use 'has' for subject-verb agreement. Also 'a big sense of community' is awkward; 'a strong sense of community' is more natural. Suggestion: match singular subjects with third-person singular verbs and choose natural collocations (has, a strong sense).

Past tense issue

× I have lived there for 10s year.

I have lived there for 10 years.

The phrase '10s year' is ungrammatical. When using a duration with present perfect, use the plural 'years' after a number greater than one and write the number properly: '10 years'. Suggestion: use correct plural form and standard numeric expression: '10 years'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, because it have many good things there.

Yes, because it has many good things.

Again 'it have' is incorrect for the singular subject 'it'; use 'it has'. The adverb 'there' at the end is unnecessary because 'it' already refers to the hometown; omitting it makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: use 'has' with singular subjects and avoid redundant words.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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