Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu word choice o thik moto hoy nai. Apni sentence gulo ke aro natural ebong clear korte paren. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu information specific na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ebong linking words use korte jate answer ta logical lage.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Sylhet, located in the northern part of Bangladesh. It is famous for its beautiful natural scenery, including the Tree Garden and tourist spots like Jaflong and Shadapathar. These places attract many visitors because of their peaceful environment and unique landscapes.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache, ar kichu sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun direct question er uttor dite, tarpor supporting details dite linking words diye. Apnar supporting details ke aro specific korte hobe, ebong unnecessary filler words (like 'uh') avoid korte hobe.

Ví dụ: I like the natural beauty of my hometown the most. Whenever I feel stressed or free, I enjoy visiting historical places and tourist spots there. These places provide a peaceful atmosphere which helps me relax and feel calm.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e grammar ar sentence structure khub important. Apni past perfect or present perfect use korte paren jemon 'I have lived there since birth'. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto rakhte, ar clear supporting details dite. Apnar answer e kichu unclear part ache, tai specific example dite hobe.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown since I was born with my parents and grandparents. It is comfortable to live there because the city has many modern amenities. For example, whenever I need help or support, people around me are always willing to assist.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e filler words (like 'uh') onek beshi, ja answer ke natural na kore. Apni chesta korun direct question er uttor dite, tarpor supporting details dite linking words diye. Apnar supporting details ke aro specific korte hobe, ebong vocabulary ke relevant rakhte hobe.

Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people. It offers many facilities such as good educational institutions and opportunities for cultural exchange. Moreover, modern resources and amenities are easily accessible, which helps young people grow and develop.

× I live in Silat city which is located northern side of Bangladesh.

✓ I live in Silat city which is located on the northern side of Bangladesh.

The preposition 'on' is required before 'the northern side' to indicate location properly in English.

× There are a number of attraction of my city such as tree garden which is very popular among Bangladesh as well as the silate is really beautiful for nature.

✓ There are a number of attractions in my city such as the tree garden which is very popular among Bangladeshis, and Silat is really beautiful because of its nature.

'Attraction' should be plural 'attractions' to match 'a number of'. Also, 'Bangladesh' should be 'Bangladeshis' to refer to people. 'Silat' should be capitalized and 'for nature' changed to 'because of its nature' for clarity.

× Lot of tourist attraction in Silet such as Javlong Shadapatur.

✓ There are lots of tourist attractions in Silat such as Javlong Shadapatur.

'Lot' should be 'lots' or 'a lot' and 'attraction' should be plural 'attractions' to agree with 'lots'. Also, 'Silet' corrected to 'Silat'.

× There are number of things that I like most in my hometown.

✓ There are a number of things that I like most in my hometown.

'Number' should be preceded by 'a' to form the correct phrase 'a number of'.

× It is really beneficial for individuals like whenever they feel like stress or whenever they free, they can uh visit historical players as well as touristic place where they feel like common peace.

✓ It is really beneficial for individuals because whenever they feel stressed or free, they can visit historical places as well as touristic places where they feel peaceful.

Preposition 'like' is incorrectly used; 'feel like stress' should be 'feel stressed'. 'Players' is incorrect; should be 'places'. 'Common peace' is unnatural; 'peaceful' is better.

× So I like most to visit this type of atmosphere.

✓ So I like most to visit this type of place.

'Atmosphere' is not a place to visit; 'place' is more appropriate here.

× Since my birth, I live there with my parents and grandparents.

✓ Since my birth, I have lived there with my parents and grandparents.

When referring to an action continuing from the past to present, present perfect tense 'have lived' is required instead of simple present 'live'.

× I live comfortable to live in this city because there are a number of amenities special modern amenities has.

✓ I live comfortably in this city because it has a number of amenities, especially modern ones.

'Comfortable' is an adjective; adverb 'comfortably' is needed to describe 'live'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× So I didn't suffer to live there as well as I get a lot of benefit to live there such as whenever I need any kind of support or help they can as much as.

✓ So I don't suffer living there and I get a lot of benefits, such as whenever I need any kind of support or help, I can get it easily.

Incorrect verb forms and sentence structure; 'didn't suffer to live' is wrong, should be 'don't suffer living'. The last part is incomplete and unclear, corrected for clarity.

× Definitely in my hometown is really beneficial for especially young people because they will get a lot of facility to live there, such as, uh, exchange or education, as well as, uh, modern facilities.

✓ Definitely, my hometown is really beneficial especially for young people because they will get a lot of facilities to live there, such as exchange programs, education, as well as modern facilities.

Sentence structure improved; 'facility' should be plural 'facilities'. Added missing words for clarity.

× Uh, they need any kind of, uh, if they need any kind of, uh, resource they can easily collected.

✓ If they need any kind of resource, they can easily collect it.

Incorrect verb form 'collected' should be base form 'collect' after modal 'can'. Also, sentence simplified for clarity.