Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“locate located”应为“is located”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和错误。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Yangzhou, which is located in the center of Jiangsu province in eastern China.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“price the food highly”应为“praise the food highly”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: I like my hometown because it has a rich history and is famous for Huaiyang cuisine, which many visitors praise for its delicious taste.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“I very like”应为“I like very much”，句子不完整。建议注意语法和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I have lived in Yangzhou since I was born, about 19 years. I like it very much because the people are hospitable and the environment is clean, so I think it is a good city to live in.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇“the the”，句子未完成，表达不够连贯。建议避免重复，完成句子，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my hometown is a good place for young people because it is very clean and has advanced education, so young people can receive a good education here.

× My hometown is in Yangzhou, which locate located in the center of Jiangsu province in the eastern of China.

✓ My hometown is in Yangzhou, which is located in the center of Jiangsu province in the east of China.

这里需要使用过去分词形式“located”来修饰“Yangzhou”，表示“扬州位于江苏省中部”。原句中“locate located”重复且错误，且“in the eastern of China”应改为“in the east of China”，因为“east”作为方向名词不需要加“ern”。

× My hometown has a very deep and long history. Moreover, my hometown has many delicious food named Huaiyang cuisine.

✓ My hometown has a very deep and long history. Moreover, my hometown has many delicious foods called Huaiyang cuisine.

“food”是不可数名词，表示食物的总称，若要表示多种食物，应使用复数“foods”。另外，“named”用于命名时不太合适，改为“called”更自然。

× Many visitors come and price the food highly.

✓ Many visitors come and praise the food highly.

“price”是“定价”的意思，语境中应使用“praise”表示“赞扬”。

× I have lived here from my birth, about 19 years.

✓ I have lived here since my birth, about 19 years.

“from my birth”应改为“since my birth”，因为表示从过去某时刻持续到现在，使用“since”更准确。

× I very like the place because the people here are hospitable and the environment is very clean.

✓ I like the place very much because the people here are hospitable and the environment is very clean.

“very like”是不正确的表达，应改为“like ... very much”表示“非常喜欢”。

× I think Yangzhou is a good city to.

✓ I think Yangzhou is a good city too.

“to”应为“too”，表示“也”的意思。

× Umm, yes, I think my hometown is a good place for young people because my hometown is very clean and the the education is very advanced.

✓ Umm, yes, I think my hometown is a good place for young people because my hometown is very clean and the education is very advanced.

“the the”重复，应删除一个“the”。

× The young people can get good education here and.

✓ The young people can get a good education here.

句子结尾“and”后无内容，造成句子不完整，应去掉“and”，并且“good education”前加冠词“a”。