Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Avoid refusing to answer the question. Instead, provide a clear and direct response to the examiner's question with a complete sentence. This shows confidence and willingness to communicate.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Springfield, a small city located in the Midwest of the United States.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and vocabulary accuracy, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be more specific and clear about what you like, and correct word choices (e.g., 'bus roads' instead of 'bass roads', 'information' instead of 'informatic').

Ví dụ: I like the transportation system in my hometown because there are many bus routes that make it easy to travel around. Additionally, the town offers excellent educational facilities for children from all backgrounds, which helps them gain valuable knowledge.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown since I was born. Over the years, many new facilities have been built, and the town has changed a lot. I really enjoy living here because of these improvements.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Be specific about why it is good for young people, and avoid vague or confusing phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is a great place for young people because it attracts many tourists. As a result, there are many job opportunities in restaurants and shops, which help young people earn a good income and improve their living standards.

× There are lots of bass roads which is really easy to transport from one place to another place.

✓ There are lots of bus roads which make it really easy to travel from one place to another.

The word 'bass' is incorrect; it should be 'bus' to refer to roads used by buses. Also, 'which is really easy to transport' is incorrect because 'transport' is a verb that requires an object; the correct phrase is 'make it really easy to travel.' Additionally, 'from one place to another place' is redundant; 'from one place to another' is sufficient.

× There are lots of education facilities to for any kind of children who are underprivileged or privileged.

✓ There are lots of educational facilities for all kinds of children, whether underprivileged or privileged.

The phrase 'to for' is incorrect; only 'for' is needed. Also, 'education facilities' should be 'educational facilities' to correctly describe the facilities. 'Any kind of children' is better expressed as 'all kinds of children' for clarity.

× They can gain lots of informatic knowledge from your education system.

✓ They can gain lots of informative knowledge from the education system.

The pronoun 'your' is inappropriate here because the student is talking about their own hometown's education system, so 'the' is more suitable. Also, 'informatic' is not the correct adjective; 'informative' is the correct word to describe knowledge that provides information.

× I lived here since when I was born.

✓ I have lived here since I was born.

The present perfect tense 'have lived' is required to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'since when' is incorrect; 'since' alone is sufficient.

× There are lots of things happened since I am here.

✓ Lots of things have happened since I have been here.

The present perfect tense 'have happened' is needed to indicate events that occurred from the past until now. Also, 'since I am here' should be 'since I have been here' to correctly express the time frame.

× Lots of facilities are came, lots of things are changed.

✓ Lots of facilities have come, and lots of things have changed.

The present perfect tense 'have come' and 'have changed' are required to describe actions that started in the past and continue to the present. 'Are came' and 'are changed' are incorrect verb forms.

× I love to being here.

✓ I love being here.

After the verb 'love,' the gerund form 'being' is used without 'to.' The phrase 'to being' is incorrect.

× Yes, obviously it's a really a good place for young generation.

✓ Yes, obviously it's a really good place for the young generation.

The phrase 'young generation' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the group. Also, 'really a good' is incorrect; it should be 'really good' without the extra 'a.'

× They can get lots of job facilities because due to this is the place of tourist place, every restaurant one one job holder for this and they can earn lots of money to uh, leave for their living standard.

✓ They can get lots of job opportunities because this is a tourist place; every restaurant employs at least one person, and they can earn enough money to support their living standards.

The phrase 'because due to' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. 'Place of tourist place' is incorrect; it should be 'a tourist place.' 'Every restaurant one one job holder for this' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'every restaurant employs at least one person.' 'Leave for their living standard' is incorrect; it should be 'support their living standards.'