Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但句子结构稍显复杂，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议简化句子结构，并使用连接词使信息更连贯。

Ví dụ: My hometown is a small city in Guangdong province, located in southern China. It is famous for its fresh seafood, which attracts many visitors.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误（如“the sea beautiful sea”），且表达不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

Ví dụ: One thing I like about my hometown is the fresh seafood because it is delicious and varied. In addition, the nearby sea provides a relaxing atmosphere for visitors.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁且内容丰富，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。建议在两句之间加入连接词，增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown for about 18 years, and during that time, I have created many unforgettable memories with my family and friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连接词。建议调整句子结构，使用连接词，并具体说明设施的优势。

Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it has many facilities such as good healthcare and schools. Moreover, the environment is friendly and green, which makes it comfortable to live in.

× Moreover, the sea beautiful sea nearby can offer a relaxing atmosphere for the visitors.

✓ Moreover, the beautiful sea nearby can offer a relaxing atmosphere for the visitors.

句子中“sea beautiful sea”词序错误，形容词应放在名词前面，正确顺序是“beautiful sea”。形容词修饰名词时，形容词应位于名词之前。