Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and redundancies. Please try to give a direct and clear answer about your hometown's location, and add one or two specific details using linking words to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Cebu City, located in Shandong province. It is a small city near Zibo. Recently, it has become famous for its delicious BBQ food, which attracts many visitors.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and lacks clear content. Please give a direct answer about what you like, and support it with specific details or examples using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I like the rich cultural events in my hometown. For example, we have traditional festivals that celebrate our history and bring the community together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations. Please give a clear and concise answer about how long you have lived there, and add supporting details with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown for over 20 years. Although I moved to another city for university, I always return home during holidays.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please give a direct opinion about whether your hometown is good for young people, and support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words.

Ví dụ: I think my hometown is a good place for young people because it offers many job opportunities and a friendly community. However, some may prefer bigger cities depending on their career goals.

× My hometown is in Cebu city of Shandong province.

✓ My hometown is in Cebu City, Shandong Province.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here. When indicating a city within a province, we use a comma to separate the city and province names, not 'of'. Also, 'City' and 'Province' should be capitalized as proper nouns.

× before Zibo city is a small uh city uh, no one knows there.

✓ Before Zibo City, there is a small city that no one knows about.

The sentence structure is unclear and lacks proper subject-verb agreement. 'No one knows there' is incorrect; it should be 'no one knows about it' or 'that no one knows about'. Also, 'Zibo city' should be 'Zibo City' as a proper noun.

× But these days more and more uh popular food is BBQ uh, there.

✓ But these days, more and more popular food like BBQ is available there.

The preposition 'is BBQ there' is awkward. It is better to say 'popular food like BBQ is available there' to clarify meaning and improve sentence flow.

× I like it. My hometown event, our cultural umm this. My hometown is umm chi destiny. Hmm.

✓ I like it. My hometown has many cultural events. My hometown is my destiny.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'My hometown event, our cultural umm this' is incomplete and lacks a verb. 'Chi destiny' seems to be a mispronunciation or error; 'my destiny' fits better. Complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs are necessary.

× I have been, uh, there for over 20 years uh, yes, when I was a child, I live with my parents, live there, live here and uh, uh, when I came into my university, I will go, uh, the other place, but in every.

✓ I have been there for over 20 years. When I was a child, I lived with my parents there. When I went to university, I went to another place, but I always returned.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'I live' should be past tense 'I lived' to match 'when I was a child'. 'I will go' should be past tense 'I went' to maintain consistency. The sentence is also fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× It should be. I think I should so.

✓ It should be. I think so too.

'I think I should so' is incorrect. The modal verb 'should' is misused here. The correct expression is 'I think so too' to agree with the previous statement.

× But this question was subjective and it comes down person to person.

✓ But this question is subjective and depends on the person.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly ('was' and 'comes'). Also, 'comes down person to person' is awkward; 'depends on the person' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And every some young people depends on their goals and.

✓ And some young people depend on their goals.

'Every some young people' is incorrect; it should be 'some young people'. Also, 'depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. The sentence is incomplete and should end properly.