Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a direct statement about your hometown, then add one or two specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Yangon, Myanmar. It is a beautiful city known for its delicious food and unique places that attract many visitors.

Gợi ý: Be more specific and organize your answer logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'I would save the food.' Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I really like the food in my hometown because it suits my taste. For example, noodles are very popular and one of my favorite dishes there.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear and direct answer without hesitation or repetition. Use simple and correct sentences to state how long you have lived there.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown for 20 years since I was born.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons and consequences logically. Avoid repetition and vague terms like 'love old peoples.'

Ví dụ: Currently, my hometown is not a good place for young people because of the ongoing war. As a result, many young people choose to study abroad, leaving mostly older residents behind.

× My hometown is Yangon, Myanmar and it's a beautiful place and it it has a lot of de delicious food and a place where you never seen the place before it really excited to live in.

✓ My hometown is Yangon, Myanmar. It's a beautiful place and it has a lot of delicious food. It's a place where you have never seen before, and it is really exciting to live in.

The original sentence has repeated words ('it it'), incorrect article usage ('de' instead of 'delicious'), and awkward sentence structure. The phrase 'a place where you never seen the place before' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'a place where you have never seen before'. Also, 'it really excited to live in' should be 'it is really exciting to live in' to correctly express the feeling.

× I would save the food. The food is really suitable for my taste and especially like noodles is one of my favorite food in my hometown.

✓ I really like the food. The food suits my taste, and especially noodles, which is one of my favorite foods in my hometown.

The phrase 'I would save the food' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'I really like the food' better expresses the intended meaning. Also, 'especially like noodles is one of my favorite food' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'especially noodles, which is one of my favorite foods'. The plural form 'foods' is used because 'noodles' is plural and refers to a type of food.

× I live, I live in my whole life, like 20 years, 20 years since since I since I was born, almost 220 years now.

✓ I have lived here my whole life, about 20 years, since I was born.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repetition and incorrect time expressions. The present perfect tense 'have lived' is appropriate to express an action continuing from the past to the present. 'Almost 220 years now' is likely a mistake; it should be 'about 20 years'.

× Right now it's not good because it there is a war in my country and it's not good for the young people. A lot of young peoples go study abroad, so only love old peoples. It's not good for young peoples.

✓ Right now, it's not good because there is a war in my country, and it's not good for young people. A lot of young people go to study abroad, so only older people remain. It's not good for young people.

The word 'peoples' is incorrectly used; 'people' is the correct plural form. Also, 'only love old peoples' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'only older people remain'. The phrase 'go study abroad' should be 'go to study abroad' for correct preposition usage.