Part 1
Giám khảo
Where is your hometown?
Thí sinh
Where is your hometown? My hometown is a small city called Changzhou, located in the southeast of China, which is near Shanghai, but it's not a metropolitan city, though it has a long history and have a lot of traditional architecture.
Giám khảo
What do you like about your home town?
Thí sinh
I enjoy a lot of things here, for example, the landscapes, the food and the culture. They are all. They can. They all feed me.
Giám khảo
How long have you lived there?
Thí sinh
I was born. I was born in this city and since that time I have lived here. It might be 20 years.
Giám khảo
Is your home town a good place for young people?
Thí sinh
I would like to say yes, because it is in a rapid development. These years we have introduced a high technology industry like some new energy to our hometown.
Where is your hometown?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复考官的问题,且注意语法错误,如“have”应为“has”。句子较长且信息丰富,但可以更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: My hometown is Changzhou, a small city in southeast China near Shanghai. It is not a big metropolitan area, but it has a rich history and many traditional buildings.
What do you like about your home town?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯,表达不清晰,缺乏具体细节和逻辑连接词。建议用完整句子表达喜欢的方面,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: I like the beautiful landscapes, delicious food, and rich culture in my hometown because they make life enjoyable and meaningful.
How long have you lived there?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复,表达不够流畅。建议合并句子,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I was born in this city and have lived here for about 20 years.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,语法和用词有误,如“in a rapid development”应为“developing rapidly”。建议使用更准确的表达并补充具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is a good place for young people because it is developing rapidly. In recent years, new energy industries and high-tech companies have been established here, providing many job opportunities.
× ...though it has a long history and have a lot of traditional architecture.
✓ ...though it has a long history and has a lot of traditional architecture.
主语是单数(it),谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”,而不是复数形式“have”。
× They are all. They can. They all feed me.
✓ They are all good. They can all feed me.
句子不完整,缺少必要成分,导致表达不清。应补充完整,使句子结构完整且意义明确。
× I was born. I was born in this city and since that time I have lived here.
✓ I was born in this city and since that time I have lived here.
“I was born.”单独使用时显得重复且不连贯,应合并为一句完整句子。
× because it is in a rapid development.
✓ because it is in rapid development.
“development”前不需要冠词“a”,因为“development”在此为不可数名词,表示抽象概念。