Part 1
Giám khảo
Where is your hometown?
Thí sinh
Where is your hometown? Oh, my hometown is Hydro, located in Zhejiang Province, is very close to Shanghai, and there are so many delicious food. You know, I really, I, I really enjoy this delicious food cause of food, special flavor.
Giám khảo
What do you like about your home town?
Thí sinh
Well, firstly, I really like the food there such as fresh, fresh seafood because it's near the East China Sea and also the scenery is beautiful. You know, they are very famous scenery such as Stone Mountain and and then the people, they are very hospitable.
Giám khảo
How long have you lived there?
Thí sinh
Well, I have lived here for about since I was born. It's about 20 years. It's a very good place to to grow up because the environment is very peaceful and the people there are very kind. So I feel very familiar to everything about here.
Giám khảo
Is your home town a good place for young people?
Thí sinh
Oh definitely yes. Firstly, there are so many delicious food for young people to eat such as fresh seafood, traditional and other traditional dishes. Besides, there are so many entertainment options for young people to play such as cinema, playground and.
Where is your hometown?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误,句子应更简洁自然。例如,避免重复“really”,并注意语法结构,使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: My hometown is Hydro, located in Zhejiang Province near Shanghai. It is famous for its delicious food with unique flavors, which I really enjoy.
What do you like about your home town?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中应避免重复词汇,如“fresh, fresh”和“and and”,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以更具体描述景点和人们的特点。
Ví dụ: I like the fresh seafood because my hometown is near the East China Sea. Moreover, the beautiful scenery, like Stone Mountain, attracts many visitors. Additionally, the local people are very hospitable and friendly.
How long have you lived there?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免语法错误和重复,如“to to”,并使句子结构更清晰。可以用更自然的表达说明居住时间和感受。
Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown for about 20 years since I was born. It is a peaceful place with kind people, so I feel very comfortable and familiar with everything here.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和句子未完成的问题,应避免重复词汇“traditional and other traditional”,并补充完整句子。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Definitely yes. My hometown offers many delicious foods for young people, including fresh seafood and traditional dishes. Besides, there are various entertainment options like cinemas and playgrounds, making it a great place for youth.
× there are so many delicious food
✓ there is so much delicious food
“food”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“foods”,应使用不可数名词的表达“much food”。
× I really, I, I really enjoy this delicious food cause of food, special flavor.
✓ I really enjoy this delicious food because of its special flavor.
“cause”是口语缩写,应使用正式的“because”;“cause of food, special flavor”结构不正确,应改为“because of its special flavor”,使句子通顺。
× there are so many delicious food for young people to eat such as fresh seafood, traditional and other traditional dishes.
✓ there is so much delicious food for young people to eat such as fresh seafood, traditional and other traditional dishes.
同样,“food”是不可数名词,不能用“many”,应使用“much”。