Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如“a small but beautiful city”，并且可以增加一些具体描述，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Changzhou, a small but beautiful city located in the southeast of China. It is known for its rich history and vibrant culture.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法有误，如“seasons and living conditions are suitable”，并且句子结构较为简单，建议使用连接词丰富句子，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I like the pleasant seasons and comfortable living conditions in Changzhou. Moreover, the modern buildings and towers look beautiful and scenic at night, which makes the city very charming.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接细节，避免重复和混乱。

Ví dụ: I have lived in Changzhou since I was born, so I am very familiar with the city. I know all the landmarks and modern buildings well.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅，同时具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: Changzhou offers good living conditions suitable for people of all ages. However, the nightlife is not very developed because most locals prefer to go to bed early and rarely go out at night.

× It is small but beautiful city.

✓ It is a small but beautiful city.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“city”是可数名词单数形式，前面需要加不定冠词。

× The seasons and living conditions in Changzhou is suitable for living, and the modern buildings and towers were beautiful and scenic in the night.

✓ The seasons and living conditions in Changzhou are suitable for living, and the modern buildings and towers are beautiful and scenic at night.

主语是复数（seasons and living conditions），谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外，“in the night”应改为“at night”，符合习惯用法。

× I have lived in Changzhou when I was born, so I'm familiar with Changzhou to the Rose, to every landmark and the Asian buildings and towers, modern buildings, I know every of them.

✓ I have lived in Changzhou since I was born, so I'm familiar with Changzhou, every landmark, and the modern buildings and towers; I know every one of them.

“have lived”与“when I was born”时间状语不匹配，应使用“since I was born”。“to the Rose”表达不清，应删除或改正。最后“every of them”错误，应为“every one of them”。

× Everything it is for the living conditions, it is suitable for every age to live and but but the nightlife isn't developed well, and most of the locals in Changzhou often go to bed early and they seldom go out in night.

✓ Regarding living conditions, it is suitable for people of every age to live, but the nightlife isn't well developed, and most of the locals in Changzhou often go to bed early and seldom go out at night.

“Everything it is for the living conditions”表达不清，应改为“Regarding living conditions”。“every age”前应加“people of”。“in night”应改为“at night”。“but but”重复，应去掉一个。