Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors and unclear words like 'reads' and 'Ann'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. For example, replace 'reads' with 'roads' and clarify 'Ann' to 'It'.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Kathmandu, the capital city of Nepal. It is famous for its roads, rich culture, many temples, and spiritual places. It is also surrounded by green forests. The city offers a unique blend of traditional and modern life.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but contains some errors like 'phrase' instead of 'fresh'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, use 'because' and 'also' appropriately and check prepositions like 'near to' should be 'near'.

Ví dụ: I like many things about my hometown, but the weather is the best because it is near the forest and full of greenery. The air is always fresh. Also, since it is located on a hilltop, we can enjoy beautiful views of the city.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting capitalization and adding linking words for coherence. For example, 'Society' should be lowercase and you can add 'because' to explain your feelings.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown for almost 24 years since I was born and raised here. I feel very attached to the environment because of the peaceful society of this place.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'who the quiet environment'. Try to use correct sentence structure and linking words to make your answer more natural and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, my hometown is a great place for young people because it is less crowded than the city area. It has many parks for children and young people who enjoy the quiet environment. Also, the people here are very calm and helpful.

× My hometown is Kathmandu, which is capital city of Nepal.

✓ My hometown is Kathmandu, which is the capital city of Nepal.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'capital city' because it refers to a specific, unique entity. In English, we use 'the' before singular nouns that are unique or known to the listener.

× It is famous for its reads, culture, many temples and spiritual places.

✓ It is famous for its roads, culture, many temples and spiritual places.

The word 'reads' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'roads'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects clarity. 'Roads' fits the context of a city description.

× Ann is fully surrounded by green forest.

✓ It is fully surrounded by green forest.

The word 'Ann' seems to be a typo or incorrect subject. The sentence should refer to the city (Kathmandu) or use 'It'. Also, 'green forest' is acceptable but 'green forests' or 'greenery' might be better.

× The air is always phrase.

✓ The air is always fresh.

The word 'phrase' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'fresh'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× because it is near to the forest and full of greenery.

✓ because it is near the forest and full of greenery.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near the forest' without 'to'.

× Yes, my hometown is great place for young people because it is less crowded than the city area.

✓ Yes, my hometown is a great place for young people because it is less crowded than the city area.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before 'great place' because it is a singular countable noun being introduced for the first time.

× It has many parks for children and young people who the quiet environment and people here are very calm and helpful.

✓ It has many parks for children and young people who enjoy the quiet environment, and people here are very calm and helpful.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'enjoy' after 'who', causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'enjoy' corrects the sentence and clarifies the meaning.