Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and direct. Start with a concise topic sentence stating your current status (student or worker), then give one or two specific supporting details (what you study, why). Use correct tense and simpler grammar to avoid confusion. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds like “uh.”

Ví dụ: I am currently a student. I completed high school (the +2 level) last year and now I am studying arts courses to improve my English because my parents are supporting me financially.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with the company and your role, then add one clear duty you performed using correct verbs and specific nouns. Avoid repetition and unclear product names; if you mention a product, describe it briefly and accurately. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Last year I worked at Vision 5 Minute in a call centre as a customer service agent. I handled incoming and outgoing calls and explained product details and pricing to customers.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement (yes/no and reason). Then give two specific benefits and an example of how the job helped. Use consistent tense and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with linking words like “because” or “which.”

Ví dụ: Yes, it was a good place to work because it helped me boost my confidence and improve my communication skills. For example, speaking to customers every day improved my English and made me more comfortable talking on the phone.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then provide two specific reasons with short examples. Use correct nouns (employers, scenery) and avoid long repetitive clauses. Use linking words like “because” and “and” to connect points coherently.

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked working there because the office was peaceful and surrounded by plants, which made the atmosphere pleasant. Also, the employers were friendly and helpful, so I enjoyed going to work every day.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence stating your plan, then add a specific detail about the kind of business or why you want to start it. Use correct grammar (plural/singular agreement and verbs) and avoid trailing sentences; finish with a complete idea. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: My future plan is to start my own business because I have wanted to be an entrepreneur since childhood. I hope to open a small retail shop (or a service I am interested in) where I can be the owner and manage daily operations.

× Uh, when as I am insurance, I have completed my +2 level in last year.

✓ I work in insurance; I completed my +2 level last year.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('when as') and uses an incorrect time expression ('in last year'). Rearranged to a clear subject-verb structure and corrected the time expression to 'last year'. Use a semicolon or two clauses joined correctly to link the occupation and the completed education.

× Uh, recently I study arts classes, uh, for improve my English language and my parents offered my financial leave, so I'm sure.

✓ Recently I have been studying arts classes to improve my English, and my parents offered financial support, so I'm sure.

Use present perfect continuous ('have been studying') for an action that started recently and continues. 'For improve' is incorrect; use 'to improve'. 'Financial leave' is unclear; likely 'financial support'. Also combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Uh, last year I worked at vision 5 minute, uh, I work in uh, call center.

✓ Last year I worked at Vision 5 Minute; I worked in a call center.

Use past tense consistently ('worked') for past employment. Company names are capitalized. Use the article 'a' before 'call center'. Replace comma splice with semicolon or separate sentences.

× Uh, I received call and calling other customers and explanation about giving explanation about tissue 500.

✓ I received calls and called other customers to explain about 'tissue 500'.

Maintain parallel verb forms: 'received calls' and 'called customers'. Remove redundant phrase 'giving explanation about'. Put the product name in quotes if needed. Ensure verbs match the intended actions.

× Uh, yes, definitely. Uh, it is good place to work because when, whenever I worked at edition 5 minute, I'll boost my confidence and communication skills also and it improves my English languages.

✓ Yes, definitely. It is a good place to work because when I worked at Edition 5 Minute, it boosted my confidence and communication skills and improved my English.

Add the article 'a' before 'good place'. Use past tense ('boosted', 'improved') to match 'when I worked'. Remove redundant 'whenever' and incorrect future 'I'll'. 'English languages' should be singular 'English'. Capitalize company name.

× So it is good place for to work.

✓ So it is a good place to work.

Remove the unnecessary 'for' after 'place' and add the article 'a'. Correct infinitive usage: 'to work'.

× Yes, definitely I like the place uh, when I work because it is peaceful, uh, surrounded by plants and natural skinery and the, the the employer are very friendly and helpful and I really enjoy it the place and work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I worked because it was peaceful, surrounded by plants and natural scenery, and the employers were very friendly and helpful; I really enjoyed the place and the work.

Use past tense ('worked', 'was', 'were', 'enjoyed') to match talking about past job. 'When I work' should be 'where I worked' or 'when I worked'. 'Skinery' is incorrect; use 'scenery'. Remove repeated words and fix word order 'enjoyed the place and the work'. Use plural 'employers' and match verb agreement.

× Uh, my future work plans is, uh, doing business, uh, myself, uh, because it is my favorite, uh, work, uh, since childhood.

✓ My future work plan is to run my own business because it has been my favorite job since childhood.

Use singular 'plan' or adjust verb accordingly; here 'plan is' matches singular. Use infinitive 'to run my own business' rather than 'doing business myself'. Use present perfect 'has been' for a state continuing from childhood. Replace 'favorite work' with 'favorite job'.

× And I, I became owner on my business and.

✓ And I want to become the owner of my business.

Use 'become the owner of' not 'owner on'. The original lacks completion; add 'want to' to express intention. Remove dangling 'and'.