Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: state your role and experience in one or two well-structured sentences. Avoid redundant phrases, fix small grammar errors (e.g., "graduation around 20 in 2022" is unclear), and use linking words if adding details (e.g., "and currently").

Ví dụ: I work as a general dentist and clinical coordinator at a private clinic in Hyderabad. I graduated in 2022 and have been practicing for two to three years, during which I was promoted to my current position.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about your workplace, then add two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers ("uh") and correct grammar ("manage the supervise the clinical stuff"). Use precise vocabulary ("clinical staff" not "clinical stuff").

Ví dụ: I work at a private dental clinic in Hyderabad, where I have been for the past two to three years. As a clinical coordinator, I manage patient scheduling and appointments, and I also treat patients and oversee the clinical staff and follow-ups.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then support with specific reasons and an example. Reduce repetition ("junior and my seniors, they both"). Use smoother linking words like "because" and "for example" correctly, and watch noun forms ("best place" not "best place I have ever worked with").

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to work because both junior and senior colleagues are friendly and supportive. For example, if a staff member is absent, others are willing to cover their duties, which keeps the clinic running smoothly.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then give one concise specific example. Remove hesitations and repetition, and correct grammar ("when I recently moved to Hyderabad"; "the atmosphere was very stressful"). Use linking words like "however" or "so" properly.

Ví dụ: I would say it depends on the workplace environment. For example, when I first moved to Hyderabad I worked at a clinic with a very stressful atmosphere, so I left and joined a more relaxed clinic where I enjoy working.

Gợi ý: State your plan clearly and add two specific, concrete details using linking words like "and" or "for example". Remove hesitations and awkward phrasing ("centre of the hometown"). Use precise vocabulary ("modern treatments", "patient-friendly design").

Ví dụ: In the future I plan to open my own private dental clinic in my hometown center. I intend to design a welcoming, patient-friendly space and offer advanced, modern treatments with the latest equipment.

× I am working as a general dentist and a clinical coordinator at a private clinic in Hyderabad.

✓ I work as a general dentist and am a clinical coordinator at a private clinic in Hyderabad.

Use the simple present to describe regular employment or permanent facts. 'I am working' suggests a temporary action; 'I work' or 'I am a clinical coordinator' fits the meaning better. Also use parallel structure: 'I work ... and am ...'.

× I have completed my graduation around 20 in 2022 and I'm working as a general dentist since last two to three years and currently I have increased my position.

✓ I completed my graduation in 2022 and have been working as a general dentist for the last two to three years; recently I was promoted.

Use simple past 'completed' for a finished action with a specific time (in 2022). Use present perfect continuous or present perfect 'have been working' with 'for' to indicate duration up to now. 'Since' requires a point in time, while 'for' is used with a period. 'Increased my position' is incorrect — use 'was promoted' or 'my position was elevated'.

× I work at a private clinic in Hyderabad since last two to three years.

✓ I have worked at a private clinic in Hyderabad for the last two to three years.

When indicating an action that started in the past and continues now, use present perfect ('have worked') and 'for' with a duration ('for the last two to three years'). Using simple present 'I work' with 'since' is incorrect.

× So I manage all the patient scheduling and appointments.

✓ So I manage all the patient scheduling and appointments.

This sentence is acceptable, but it is clearer to say 'patient scheduling and appointment systems' or 'patients' scheduling and appointments'. If keeping original structure, add 'the' before 'patients' only when referring to a specific group. No grammatical article correction required, so keep as is.

× In addition to it, I also treat patients and do follow-ups, uh and manage the supervise the clinical stuff.

✓ In addition, I treat patients, do follow-ups, and supervise the clinical staff.

Use parallel verbs ('treat', 'do', 'supervise'). 'Manage the supervise' is ungrammatical; choose one verb. 'Clinical stuff' is informal and vague; use 'clinical staff'. Remove filler 'uh' and use commas for list clarity.

× Yes, I think it is one of the best place I have ever worked with because all my staff, the junior and my seniors, they both are very friendly and have kind and helping nature.

✓ Yes, I think it is one of the best places I have ever worked because both the junior staff and my seniors are very friendly and helpful.

Use plural 'places' after 'one of the'. Do not use 'worked with' after 'worked' in this context. 'the junior and my seniors' is unclear; use 'the junior staff and my seniors'. 'Kind and helping nature' is unnatural; use 'friendly and helpful'. Remove redundant 'they both'.

× And for example if one of their staff or friend is absent, they don't mind replacing them for a day.

✓ For example, if one of the staff or a friend is absent, they don't mind covering for them for a day.

'One of their staff or friend' is awkward; say 'one of the staff or a friend'. Use 'covering for them' or 'replacing them' is acceptable but 'covering for them' is more natural. Ensure pronoun agreement: 'one of the staff ... they' is acceptable in informal speech referring to staff collectively.

× Uh, well, I think it depends on the environment of the work.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the work environment.

Use the noun phrase 'work environment' instead of 'environment of the work'. This is more natural word order and collocation.

× For example, uh, when I recently located to Hyderabad, I worked at few places which was not the atmosphere was very stressful.

✓ For example, when I recently moved to Hyderabad, I worked at a few places where the atmosphere was very stressful.

Use 'moved to' or 'relocated to' instead of 'located to'. Use 'a few places' (include article 'a'). Use 'where' not 'which' to introduce a clause about place. 'was not the atmosphere was very stressful' is ungrammatical; correct: 'where the atmosphere was very stressful.'

× So I, I left that place and joined at some the better place where the environment is stress free and I I can enjoy working with.

✓ So I left that job and joined a better place where the environment is stress-free and I can enjoy working there.

Say 'left that job' or 'left that place'. Use 'joined a better place' (no 'at' or extra 'the'). Use 'stress-free' as a hyphenated adjective. 'Enjoy working with' is incomplete; use 'enjoy working there' or 'enjoy working with the team.' Remove duplicate 'I'.

× Uh, currently I'm working, so for, for my future, I'm thinking of opening a, my own private clinic in the centre of the hometown.

✓ Currently I'm working, but for the future I'm thinking of opening my own private clinic in the center of my hometown.

Streamline phrasing: 'for the future' or 'in the future' rather than 'for, for my future'. Remove unnecessary commas and 'a' before 'my own'. Use 'center' (or 'centre' British spelling) and 'my hometown' for clarity.

× And I will be designing it in such a way that it will be very welcoming for the patient and the environment and the treatment provided will be more advanced.

✓ I will design it so that it is very welcoming for patients, the environment is comfortable, and the treatments provided are more advanced.

Use 'I will design' rather than progressive 'I will be designing' for a planned future action. Use plural 'patients' and parallel structure for the list: 'welcoming for patients, the environment is comfortable, and the treatments provided are more advanced.' Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'treatments are'.