Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で情報があるが、いくつかの発音・語彙の誤り（例：地名や専門分野の単語）と冗長な表現がある。より自然にするために、1文目で明確に職業を述べ、その後で詳細（年数、専門分野）を短くまとめ、不要な繰り返しを避けること。流れを良くするための接続語（'and' や 'where I work'）を入れると良い。

Ví dụ: I'm a lawyer — a fifth-year associate at a well-known law firm in Marlowe, where I specialise in financial and transactional law.

Gợi ý: 答えは場所の説明と補足情報を含んでいるが、地名や理由の説明で混乱が見られる（'Minority'は誤りの可能性）。また、同じ意味の内容を繰り返している。正確な地名を使い、簡潔に場所と一文で会社の特徴を述べると良い。

Ví dụ: I work at a major law firm in Marlowe, a district known for hosting many of Japan's leading law firms; my firm is one of the country's most reputable practices.

Gợi ý: 意見ははっきりしていて具体例もあるが、最後の文が不自然（'while walking'）で意図が伝わりにくい。理由と具体的な例を論理的に接続し、自然な表現に直すこと。

Ví dụ: To be honest, it's not ideal. The office atmosphere is quite tense and colleagues are usually too busy, so it's difficult to ask questions or have casual conversations during breaks.

Gợi ý: 意見の繰り返しが多く、文法や語彙の誤り（'whose purposes are good'）により意味が不明瞭になっている。否定的な点を述べた後で、肯定的な点を明確に一文で示すと良い。具体例は簡潔で正確な表現にすること。

Ví dụ: Overall I don't particularly like it because colleagues are too busy to communicate, but there are some positives — for instance, the firm provides private meeting rooms that anyone can book.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わるが、文法の誤りや優柔不断な表現（'I'm concerned that I've continued'、'It is the option that I changed my career'）が多い。まず明確な目標を述べ（パートナーになる）、次に代替案を簡潔に述べる。不要な間投詞を減らし、時制を正しく使うこと。

Ví dụ: My main goal is to become a partner at my firm within the next five years, but I am also open to changing careers if I feel it would suit me better in the future.

× I work as a lawyer. I'm a fifth year associate at a law firm in Marlowe. I specialize in financial law and instructional finance.

✓ I work as a lawyer. I'm a fifth-year associate at a law firm in Marlowe. I specialize in financial law and institutional finance.

Hyphenation and word choice: 'fifth year' as a compound adjective before a noun should be hyphenated to 'fifth-year'. 'Instructional finance' is not the correct term; likely intended 'institutional finance'. Use the present simple 'I work/I specialize' to describe current facts. Grammar problem type ID:6

× As I said, I work at a law firm in Minority. Minority is home to many of Japan's prominent law firms. My firm is one of the most well known ones in the country.

✓ As I said, I work at a law firm in Minority. Minority is home to many of Japan's prominent law firms. My firm is one of the most well-known in the country.

Hyphenation and article use: 'well known' used as a compound adjective should be 'well-known'. Also 'ones' is unnecessary; 'one of the most well-known' suffices. Tense and structure are appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:3

× Honestly, I don't think so. Many lawyers seem too busy and it is hard to ask questions because the atmosphere in the office is quite tense. Actually, I rarely talk with my colleagues while walking.

✓ Honestly, I don't think so. Many lawyers seem too busy and it's hard to ask questions because the atmosphere in the office is quite tense. Actually, I rarely talk with my colleagues while walking.

Contraction: 'it is' to 'it's' optional but not required; main issue is fine. No major grammar error besides register. Kept present simple to describe habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

Question form: Examiner's question should use 'Do you like...' rather than 'Would you like...' if asking preference about current job. 'Would you like' implies desire for change. Use simple present for general likes. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Honestly, I don't like where I work. As I mentioned, everyone seems too busy and it is hard to ask questions. However, whose purposes are good? For example, their personal meeting rooms, which is available for everyone.

✓ Honestly, I don't like where I work. As I mentioned, everyone seems too busy and it's hard to ask questions. However, some facilities are good. For example, their private meeting rooms are available for everyone.

Pronoun and noun choice: 'whose purposes are good' is incorrect; use 'some facilities are good' to refer to aspects of the workplace. 'Personal meeting rooms' should be 'private meeting rooms' and 'which is available' must agree with plural noun: 'are available.' Maintain present simple for states. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Uh, from now on I'm concerned that I've continued my current career. I work as a lawyer and I want to be a partner lawyer in the next 5 years. However, uh. It is the option that I changed my career.

✓ From now on, I'm concerned about continuing my current career. I work as a lawyer and I want to become a partner within the next five years. However, I am considering the option of changing my career.

Verb tense and wording: 'concerned that I've continued' is ungrammatical; use 'concerned about continuing' to express worry about the future of a current action. 'Be a partner lawyer' should be 'become a partner' or 'become a partner lawyer'; 'in the next 5 years' better as 'within the next five years.' 'It is the option that I changed my career' is incorrect; use 'I am considering the option of changing my career.' Use present continuous/modal meaning for future plans. Grammar problem type ID:6