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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Currently I'm employed as a special educator in an organization. My job is to train children with disabilities.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I work in an organization. It is basically a vocational institute which aims to train children with special needs such as those with intellectual disability, autism, ADHD and blindness.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

Definitely it is an ideal place to work for me as I am a no voice and I need some experience in this field. So this is a perfect place as it provides me a positive environment to gain some specialized skills in dealing with children.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love working there because of positive environment. The manager and my colleagues are very kind and considerate. They always help me in any difficult situation that I face. Overall, it is a best place to work.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

In future, I am planning to become an expert, especially dealing with children with ADHD and autism. Therefore, I am focusing on getting some specialized skills in this particular profession.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it sound more natural and complete. Try to avoid very short answers and add a reason or example to support your statement.

Ví dụ: Currently, I am employed as a special educator in an organization, where I train children with disabilities to help them develop essential skills.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but can be improved by combining sentences using linking words to make it more coherent and natural. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating similar words.

Ví dụ: I work at a vocational institute that specializes in training children with special needs, including those with intellectual disabilities, autism, ADHD, and blindness.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'I am a no voice' which affects clarity. Also, try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words. Be specific about why the environment is positive and how it helps you gain skills.

Ví dụ: Definitely, it is an ideal place for me to work because it offers a supportive environment where I can gain valuable experience and develop specialized skills in working with children.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive but can be improved by linking your ideas smoothly and avoiding repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect your points and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love working there because of the positive environment; for example, the manager and my colleagues are very kind and always support me during difficult situations.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more fluent. Also, try to add a reason or explain how you plan to achieve your goal.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to become an expert in working with children with ADHD and autism; therefore, I am currently focusing on acquiring specialized skills through training and practical experience.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Definitely it is an ideal place to work for me as I am a no voice and I need some experience in this field.

Definitely it is an ideal place to work for me as I have no voice and I need some experience in this field.

The phrase 'I am a no voice' is incorrect because 'no voice' is a noun phrase and cannot be used with 'am' as a predicate adjective. The correct expression is 'I have no voice' to indicate the absence of voice. Using 'have' correctly expresses possession or lack thereof.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, I love working there because of positive environment.

Yes, I love working there because of the positive environment.

The noun 'environment' is singular and countable in this context, so it requires the definite article 'the' to specify the particular environment being referred to. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence sound incomplete or incorrect.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Overall, it is a best place to work.

Overall, it is the best place to work.

When using superlative adjectives like 'best', the definite article 'the' must be used before the adjective. Saying 'a best place' is incorrect because 'best' implies uniqueness and requires 'the'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
PerfectIdeal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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