Work— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I am a university graduate but currently I'm not working anywhere. I'm still looking for jobs and applying at different places. But yeah I would love to do a job if I find 1 and I do wanna do a job in genetic counseling.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
I am currently working at a laboratory where we have different samples of aids, where we test if the person have aids or not. It's a highly dangerous job, you have to be very cautious. But yeah, it's a fun job to do.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
If you're a cautious person and you take your work very seriously, you should be working there. Otherwise not 'cause the blood samples have are very, very dangerous. They have dangerous diseases scaring in them. So if you're not very cautious, you can even catch the disease.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
Personally, I would not like the place where I work because it's very dangerous, it's life threatening and one and one has to be very cautious while working there and it does not even pay that much. So why do I waste my life to work there?
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
In future I want to become a genetic counselor. A genetic counselor is a person who does counseling of those people who have genetic diseases like autism or Down syndrome. I want to work there 'cause it's a very good white collar job where you take care of people's mental health and.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly informal. Try to be more concise and avoid using 'yeah' and 'wanna' in formal speaking. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: I have graduated from university and am currently seeking job opportunities. I am particularly interested in working as a genetic counselor because it aligns with my career goals.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but contains some grammatical errors and informal language. Avoid repeating 'where' and use correct verb forms. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.
Ví dụ: I currently work in a laboratory that tests samples for AIDS. Although it is a dangerous job requiring caution, I find it interesting and rewarding.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, be careful with sentence structure and vocabulary.
Ví dụ: It is a good place to work if you are careful and responsible. However, because the blood samples contain dangerous diseases, it can be risky for those who are not cautious.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but is too informal and includes some repetition. Avoid rhetorical questions and use linking words to organize your ideas better.
Ví dụ: I would not prefer to work there because the job is dangerous and life-threatening. Additionally, the salary is not sufficient to justify the risks involved.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but incomplete and slightly informal. Avoid using 'cause' and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to become a genetic counselor. This role involves advising individuals with genetic conditions such as autism or Down syndrome. I am interested in this profession because it is a respected white-collar job that focuses on supporting people's mental health.
Ngữ pháp
× I'm still looking for jobs and applying at different places.
✓ I'm still looking for jobs and applying to different places.
The verb 'applying' should be followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations where one seeks a job. Using 'at' is incorrect in this context.
× where we have different samples of aids, where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we have different samples of AIDS, where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
The word 'AIDS' is an acronym and should be capitalized and treated as singular when referring to the disease. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The correct preposition to use with 'applying' when referring to places or organizations is 'to', not 'at'.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
× where we test if the person have aids or not.
✓ where we test if the person has AIDS or not.
Subject-verb agreement error: 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.
× applying at different places.
✓ applying to different places.
The verb 'apply' is followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to places or organizations.
× if the person have aids or not.
✓ if the person has AIDS or not.
The verb must agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'have' should be 'has'.
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