Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and clarify terms (e.g., 'else exam' is unclear). Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student. I just graduated from high school this year, and now I am preparing for an English exam to apply to university.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. Avoid mixing unrelated information and use correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: I don't have a job at the moment because I am a full-time student living with my parents after graduating from high school earlier this year.

Gợi ý: This answer does not address the question. Try to understand the question and respond appropriately. If unsure, ask for clarification politely or attempt a relevant answer.

Ví dụ: Since I am not currently working, I cannot say if the place is good to work. However, I hope to find a positive work environment in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but needs better structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Be concise and clear.

Ví dụ: I am not currently working, but my first job was as a content creator. I really enjoyed the work environment and interacting with people. Unfortunately, I had to leave because of time constraints.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and shows your goals, but improve grammar and vocabulary for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal words like 'wanna'.

Ví dụ: In the future, I want to become a criminal psychologist to serve my country. I am interested in understanding the human mind, especially the minds of criminals and those who commit violent acts.

× I just graduated from high school in 2025.

✓ I just graduated from high school in 2023.

The sentence uses 'just graduated' which is past tense, but the year 2025 is in the future. The year should reflect a past or current time to match the past tense verb 'graduated'.

× I am taking an else exam right now for my university application.

✓ I am taking another exam right now for my university application.

The word 'else' is incorrectly used here. 'Another' is the correct quantifier to indicate an additional exam.

× I staying at my parents' house who just graduated from high school this year early so I don't have a job currently.

✓ I am staying at my parents' house. I just graduated from high school earlier this year, so I don't have a job currently.

The verb 'staying' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, the sentence is run-on and unclear; splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× I staying at my parents' house who just graduated from high school this year early so I don't have a job currently.

✓ I am staying at my parents' house. I just graduated from high school earlier this year, so I don't have a job currently.

The relative pronoun 'who' incorrectly refers to 'parents' but the intended subject is the student. Rephrasing avoids confusion.

× I recently don't work anywhere and the last job I had was also my first job.

✓ I don't work anywhere recently, and the last job I had was also my first job.

The adverb 'recently' is better placed after the auxiliary verb 'do' for correct present tense negation.

× Very funny thing and it was as a content creator.

✓ It was a very interesting experience as a content creator.

The phrase 'Very funny thing' is awkward and unclear. 'Interesting experience' is more appropriate. Also, 'as a content creator' correctly indicates the role.

× I really love that place at the environment, I like interacting with people.

✓ I really loved the environment there; I liked interacting with people.

The phrase 'that place at the environment' is incorrect. 'The environment there' is correct. Also, past tense 'loved' and 'liked' match the past job context.

× However, due to time problem I had to give it.

✓ However, due to time problems, I had to quit it.

The phrase 'time problem' should be plural 'time problems'. Also, 'give it' is incorrect; 'quit it' or 'give it up' is appropriate for leaving a job.

× So in the future, I wanna be a criminal psychologist and serve the nation.

✓ So in the future, I want to be a criminal psychologist and serve the nation.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech or writing.

× Also, learn more about how interesting a human mindset is, especially of those who are criminals and those occurring violence act.

✓ Also, I want to learn more about how interesting the human mindset is, especially of those who are criminals and those who commit violent acts.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'learn'. 'Human mindset' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Those occurring violence act' is incorrect; it should be 'those who commit violent acts'.