Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly state your current status and job, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I graduated last year, and now I work as a freelance web developer. I work independently and receive projects through online platforms. I am passionate about coding because it energizes me and I really enjoy it.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons why working from home suits you.

Ví dụ: As a freelancer, I prefer to work from home because it offers a lot of independence and flexibility. Also, I can take short breaks to stretch or dance, which helps me stay motivated. Moreover, working at home is more cost-effective than renting an office.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and improve vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, it is a good place to work because it is calming and offers a lot of independence and flexibility. Additionally, I can listen to music, dance, and enjoy coffee while working, which makes the environment enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you like your workplace.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my workplace because it is a calm and safe environment. Also, I can do anything I want, and I save money since I don't have to rent an office or go to cafes like other freelancers.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your plans and reasons. Be specific about your goals and motivations.

Ví dụ: I want to become an AI engineer because AI is becoming very important and covers many fields. Therefore, I need to learn about this subject. In the future, I plan to use AI to help people for free and improve work efficiency.

× I'm a graduating last year, now I'm working.

✓ I graduated last year, now I'm working.

The phrase 'I'm a graduating last year' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense with a past time reference. The correct past tense form 'I graduated last year' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past.

× I work freelancer of web developer.

✓ I work as a freelance web developer.

The phrase 'work freelancer of web developer' is incorrect. The preposition 'as' is needed to indicate the role, and 'freelance' is the correct adjective form to describe the type of work.

× I receive assessment which through online platform.

✓ I receive assessments through an online platform.

The phrase 'which through online platform' is incorrect. The preposition 'through' should directly connect to 'online platform', and 'assessments' should be plural to match the context.

× I'm a passionate about decoding because it give me a lot of energy and I really like it.

✓ I'm passionate about coding because it gives me a lot of energy and I really like it.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'passionate' which is an adjective. Also, 'decoding' should be 'coding' if referring to programming, and the verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× As a freelancer I prefer to work from home because it offer an A lot of independence and a flexibility and additionally I can take a short break to stretch or dance which helped me to motivating for a month.

✓ As a freelancer, I prefer to work from home because it offers a lot of independence and flexibility. Additionally, I can take short breaks to stretch or dance, which helps me stay motivated throughout the month.

The verb 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The article 'an' before 'A lot' is incorrect; 'a lot' does not need an article. 'A flexibility' is incorrect; 'flexibility' is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Helped me to motivating' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me stay motivated' to maintain present tense and correct verb form.

× Working at home is more cost effective than rent a office or.

✓ Working at home is more cost-effective than renting an office.

The phrase 'than rent a office or' is incorrect. After 'than', the gerund form 'renting' should be used. Also, 'a office' should be 'an office' because 'office' starts with a vowel sound. The word 'or' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Hum always is a calming place and you can enjoy that, this place and it's a lot of independence and flexibility and you can do it.

✓ Home is always a calming place and you can enjoy it. This place offers a lot of independence and flexibility, and you can do what you want.

The word 'Hum' is a typo and should be 'Home'. The phrase 'you can enjoy that, this place' is confusing; 'enjoy it' is clearer. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity. 'You can do it' is vague; 'do what you want' is clearer.

× You can vomit music and You Can Dance in and you can eat a lot of coffee.

✓ You can listen to music and you can dance, and you can drink a lot of coffee.

The word 'vomit' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'listen to' when referring to music. 'Eat a lot of coffee' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'drink' for coffee. Capitalization errors are also corrected.

× Yes, I really like it because it's this place is a very call me and a safe place and you can anything do it and you can save more money because some people go cafe or rent the office to freelancer.

✓ Yes, I really like it because this place is very calm and safe, and you can do anything there. You can save more money because some people go to cafes or rent offices as freelancers.

The phrase 'it's this place is a very call me' is incorrect; it should be 'this place is very calm'. 'You can anything do it' is incorrect; correct word order is 'you can do anything there'. 'Go cafe' should be 'go to cafes'. 'Rent the office to freelancer' should be 'rent offices as freelancers'.

× I wanna be AI engineering but I found an AI it would be cover the most everything and I have to know about this subject because I have a plan for the future to help the people in free and is very efficient for work.

✓ I want to be an AI engineer, but I found that AI will cover most things, so I have to learn about this subject because I have a plan for the future to help people for free and make work more efficient.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is correct. 'AI engineering' should be 'an AI engineer'. 'I found an AI it would be cover the most everything' is incorrect; it should be 'I found that AI will cover most things'. 'I have to know about this subject' should be 'I have to learn about this subject'. 'Help the people in free' should be 'help people for free'. 'Is very efficient for work' should be 'make work more efficient'.