Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: I am a freelance developer, which means I work independently. I enjoy this job because it allows me to improve my skills and manage my own schedule. Additionally, I receive project requests from clients through online platforms.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, clarify your points with specific details.

Ví dụ: I work from home since I am a freelancer and don't need to go to an office. I usually use my laptop to communicate with clients and complete my projects, which gives me flexibility.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Make sure to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Avoid unclear expressions like 'it's a call me please'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe working from home is an excellent choice for freelancers because it allows us to concentrate better and improve the quality of our work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but contains some awkward expressions and minor grammar errors. Try to use more natural phrases and organize your ideas with linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy working at home because it gives me a lot of independence. For example, I can listen to music loudly or even dance without worrying about disturbing others. Moreover, I have easy access to food and drinks, which makes my work environment very comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes and repetition. Try to express your future plans clearly with correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your reasons and goals.

Ví dụ: I want to become an AI engineer because I believe artificial intelligence will play a major role in the future. I am passionate about this field and plan to use AI to help people, especially by improving mental health care.

× I am freelancer of VIP developer.

✓ I am a freelancer for VIP developer.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate working for a company or client is 'for'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'freelancer' because it is a singular countable noun.

× I work myself and I really like this job because I am independent about my job and I can improve it.

✓ I work by myself and I really like this job because I am independent in my job and I can improve it.

The phrase 'work myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'work by myself' to indicate working alone. Also, the preposition 'about' is incorrect here; 'independent in my job' is the proper phrase to express independence regarding work.

× I get a suggestion from client through online website.

✓ I get suggestions from clients through online websites.

The singular 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' to match the general context. 'Client' should be plural 'clients' because suggestions come from multiple clients. Also, 'online website' is redundant; 'online websites' is more natural.

× I usually use my laptop because I have to find this job from the client and to get the money.

✓ I usually use my laptop because I have to find jobs from clients and get paid.

The phrase 'find this job from the client' is awkward; 'find jobs from clients' is clearer. 'To get the money' is better expressed as 'get paid' in this context.

× Yes, I think working from home is a great option for all of the freelancers because it's a call me please and it gives you opportunity to focus your job and improve the product.

✓ Yes, I think working from home is a great option for all freelancers because it is convenient and it gives you the opportunity to focus on your job and improve the product.

The phrase 'it's a call me please' is incorrect and unclear; 'it is convenient' fits the intended meaning. 'Gives you opportunity' needs the article 'the' before 'opportunity'. Also, 'focus your job' should be 'focus on your job'.

× I can listen to music, high volume and even dance without worrying about beginning to jog.

✓ I can listen to music at high volume and even dance without worrying about bothering others.

The phrase 'high volume' needs the preposition 'at' to indicate the level of sound. 'Worrying about beginning to jog' is incorrect and unclear; the intended meaning is likely 'worrying about bothering others'.

× Also I have easy access to food and drink or tea, coffee which make my world environment very comfortable.

✓ Also, I have easy access to food and drinks like tea and coffee, which make my work environment very comfortable.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used; 'like' is better to list examples. 'Drink' should be plural 'drinks'. 'World environment' is incorrect; 'work environment' is the correct phrase.

× I wanna be AI engineering because I found AI in the future cover the most everything and you I really like it and think I really like it.

✓ I want to be an AI engineer because I believe AI will cover most things in the future, and I really like it.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is correct. 'AI engineering' is a field, but the person wants to be an 'AI engineer' (a person). 'Found' is past tense; 'believe' is present tense to express opinion. 'Cover the most everything' is incorrect; 'cover most things' is better.

× Work AI engineering and I have a plan in my mind for the future to help the people and improve the mental health.

✓ I want to work in AI engineering, and I have a plan to help people and improve mental health in the future.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'Work AI engineering' is incomplete; 'I want to work in AI engineering' is correct. 'The people' should be 'people' without 'the' in this context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.